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February 9, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I can't wait for more of the pairings. This is so wounderful to read and the female line up is just great!!!!!
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February 5, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Awesome chapter I loved it hope you update soon.
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February 5, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I sometimes wish that the dead Jinchuuriki were still alive, but that'd set the plot back some.
And YEAH for random guns appearances!
Ooh! I have a suggestion: NarusakuFEMsasu. Because noones done it.
Please continue
Mrfipp
And YEAH for random guns appearances!
Ooh! I have a suggestion: NarusakuFEMsasu. Because noones done it.
Please continue
Mrfipp
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February 4, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Wild Zagger, wild! Can't wait for the next chappie. So next is the delicate girl Yakumo huh? You might go slow and then work it up in too... hmm I think WILD!!! After all she might be a kinky girl (it won't involve a strip club or an S&M club would it) cause the quite ones always are (look at the blushing beauty Hinata)! So Kushina gets to see her son in his birthday suite for the first time in a story?
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February 4, 2009 at 12:00 AM
You need to work on your spelling.
The proper word that should of been used in one sentence I seen when blushes at her commit, when it should be comment. Your a good writer and all but shit like that annoy me.
The proper word that should of been used in one sentence I seen when blushes at her commit, when it should be comment. Your a good writer and all but shit like that annoy me.
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February 4, 2009 at 12:00 AM
MMMMMMOOOOOOOOOOORRRRRRRREEEEEEEEEEE! Keep writting this group. It's pass any words I can come up with and should be prised!
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February 4, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I hope you pick this up again sometime, your list has some girls I would really be looking forward to like Kushina, Moegi, Isaribi, Ayame, and Tsunami, there's not enough of them written. After the fem. Sasuke chapter, I'd also like to see what you can do with a Fem. Gaara.
If you are doing crossovers, I would suggest Naruto/Hinata/Ururu-(Bleach)
If you are doing crossovers, I would suggest Naruto/Hinata/Ururu-(Bleach)
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June 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
The chap I found most enjoyable was chapter 3 because Kyuubi explained why she stayed.
I'm excited about the Bleach pairings. They look VERY promising, and I believe that you can make em' work.
I'm excited about the Bleach pairings. They look VERY promising, and I believe that you can make em' work.
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April 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
dude great fics i like them on both ff and here anyways i just watched the Naruto movie number 4 and thought that Shion would be a great character for some of your fics. if you havent watched tohe movie yet u should c ya
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April 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I still Nariko would be a good name for Fem. Gaara, after all the characteer Nariko from Heavenly Sword looks almost exactly like a female Gaara. Unfortunately, I can't help with anything else except a pairing idea. For the pairing with Kin, Tayuya, and ??? I'd suggest putting in Karin, the only other female minion of Orochimaru.