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for The Sharingan's Power

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person anonymous
schedule October 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I love this one shot! It was such a great read. I loved Sakura's first reaction of o_o as this was happening and how she slowly warmed up to it all. Then there was Sasuke who lost control in a great way.
schedule May 15, 2008 at 12:00 AM
LOL! That was kinda cute!
schedule April 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
hot liked it will done
person the sibs
schedule November 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
awesome.
write more!!
person Delta
schedule October 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
very good, I'm curious if youre going to write more
person sibs
schedule October 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
awesome
person Tank
schedule September 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
That's a rather nifty play on an old theme (Sharingan mind control). Don't recall seeing one exactly like it. Cool! (Though Sasuke was being rather crafty... and a little mean.) Can we have some more? ^^

(BTW, it's Saiminjutsu; "gan" means eye, and Sasuke only has the Sharingan, which is capable of Saiminjutsu.) And awww... Sakura quit being bubble-headed since the Chuunin exams, when she was 12+.

Still, love this! Write more! Update!
schedule September 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
That was hot ;) Good.
schedule September 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
hahahahhahaa

Naruto: "Ne, Sasuke, how did you finally land Sakura in the sack?"

Sasuke: "Eh, I just had to rape her a bit first until she got into it. After that, she was all mine."


This is sick, but delightfully great at the same time. ^^