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person lily of the nile
schedule December 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
by the wat it's 22 sasuke and 5 gaara. and my vote is for sasuke so that makes it 23 sasuke.
person kittycat
schedule December 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
LOVE IT!!!!!! Can't wait for you to update and my votes for sasuke.
person tash1021
schedule November 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
aww poor baby but great start i hope u continue soon
as for the pairing... i have no clue i like them all XD but has to be naruto uke :P
person rage
schedule October 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
sounds like its gonna be good, hope ya update soon.
person cally
schedule October 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
please write more to this!!
person O_O
schedule September 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hey, i like your story. I think it should be sasukexnaruto. That would make me very happy.:D
schedule September 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
i like it and i think he should be paired up with gaara, oh and whats the babys name i think tori is a cute name for a baby girl (it means bird in japanese) but yeah i can't wait for the next chapter. ja ne.
person Ria
schedule September 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I vote Sasuke. NaruSasu is one of the best pairings in my opinion, hehe.
person DesperadoSweetie
schedule September 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This is a really good beginning. It has alot of suspense already for just the beginning of the story, but I would be more then interested in knowing what is going to happen next.

As far as the voting for who should be with Naruto, in my opinion, Sasuke is the only one who should be with him. I know that others should have a go with him, but I find it hard to read a story where those two aren't paired together. But I will continue with this story (without complaining if it isn't Sasuke) because it is soooooo good.

I look forward to your next update.
person nawatia
schedule September 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Interesting! Poor baby!!!! You have me hooked - i now want to know the rest of the story. I kinda want Sasuke as the other half, but that is so common, so how about Gaara.