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September 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
OHhh this is pretty good, I've never read a story like this before.
Nice job!
Hmmm I wasn't to sure what you were talking about with the voting but I'm guessing it's whether Naruto ends up with, sasuke, gaara, or neji right?
well if so then definitely put him with sasuke! PLEASE! We can never have to many SasuNaru Fics!!!
Anyway nicely done, you could have a bit more detial placed in certain areas but other then that it's good. Nice job
Nice job!
Hmmm I wasn't to sure what you were talking about with the voting but I'm guessing it's whether Naruto ends up with, sasuke, gaara, or neji right?
well if so then definitely put him with sasuke! PLEASE! We can never have to many SasuNaru Fics!!!
Anyway nicely done, you could have a bit more detial placed in certain areas but other then that it's good. Nice job
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September 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Naruto raising a girl, oh man, I can't wait, this is going to be priceless!!!
BTW I vote Gaara, he will be even more funny holding a baby girl.
BTW I vote Gaara, he will be even more funny holding a baby girl.
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September 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
ohh i like this story, keep it up!
as for your poll... id vote for sasuke! ehehe
as for your poll... id vote for sasuke! ehehe
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September 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
wow i luved this XD keep goin its gud :)
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September 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Gaara, Gaara, Gaara!! Thats my vote! I really like this story and I can't wait to see where you go with this!
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September 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This is the start of a great story, I want more. BTW, I vote for sasuke. :D
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September 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Sasuke, It's has to be Sasuke. Naruto belongs with Sasuke. End of story!
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September 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I like the way this story started out and I'm looking forward to the next update. If I had to choose, I believe that I would choose Sasuke to be our favorite blonde and that baby girl. So I choose Sasuke.
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September 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter I think this should be a Naruto/SasUKE fic with Sasuke as the UKE.
I can’t wait to read the next chapter so keep on writing and UPDATE SOON.
I can’t wait to read the next chapter so keep on writing and UPDATE SOON.
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September 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Ello,
9-24-07
My Vote would be a threesome with Gaara and Sasuke.... but I don't know if you do that. So… if I have to pick one I would have to first ask what the time setting is and if it is an AU or not.
My Review would be that you have a really great idea going here. The flow of the story was very good but I have a question shouldn’t of Naruto heard Nataku-san name as well? And are Kosuke and Nataku both males? For Kosuke seem to be the over powering tall alpha male (and the seme) while Nataku was the one holding the baby and seem to be submissive (aka the uke) and you said: "Nataku nodded rubbing HIS eyes to stop the tears and in a blink they both disappeared into the night." So then they are both males and somehow they have a baby girl and they are getting rid of it.... what?
~The Black Sand of Gara
P.S. If you need a Beta I would love to do it but I do go to school and work so me getting back to you could be a little slow but I would try my best to get them back as quick as possible.
9-24-07
My Vote would be a threesome with Gaara and Sasuke.... but I don't know if you do that. So… if I have to pick one I would have to first ask what the time setting is and if it is an AU or not.
My Review would be that you have a really great idea going here. The flow of the story was very good but I have a question shouldn’t of Naruto heard Nataku-san name as well? And are Kosuke and Nataku both males? For Kosuke seem to be the over powering tall alpha male (and the seme) while Nataku was the one holding the baby and seem to be submissive (aka the uke) and you said: "Nataku nodded rubbing HIS eyes to stop the tears and in a blink they both disappeared into the night." So then they are both males and somehow they have a baby girl and they are getting rid of it.... what?
~The Black Sand of Gara
P.S. If you need a Beta I would love to do it but I do go to school and work so me getting back to you could be a little slow but I would try my best to get them back as quick as possible.