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for Too Many Drinks!

by KoibitoFemme

schedule September 8, 2010 at 12:00 AM
epic story, funny and hot and just... epic. Thanks it was great and it's a damn shame u can't publish n make money off this. Thanks for sharing.
person filiasan
schedule April 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Damn you, for being such a talented writer!
person gaara89
schedule March 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I don't know if I reviewed this a final time, but if i didn't Bad me! Because I should have! This story was great! It made me rethink mpreg stories, and now when I see that, I'm not automatically turned off. The kids Shu, and Kyu are absolutely adorable! Good work! This is one of the better Gaa/Naru stories I've ever read. I thank you for all your comments on my work as well, if you don't get a chance to see the review responses I posted on "Kissing Booth". You're a great writer, I've loved all the little side stories you did to this as well, and I hope to see more from you soon!

~Reigh~
schedule February 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
That was a great story and I'm glad to be here for the whole thing! I laughed so hard and even shed a tear or three.(more from laughing so hard). Looking forward to your nest epic story and e- me sometime!
schedule January 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
GAH! I SO WANT TO GET MY HANDS ON THAT PILL! IF THERE REALLY IS ONE, THEN I CAN WISH MY BRO A HAPPY CONCEIVING! THE KIDS WERE ADORABLE, THOUIGH I KINDA FEEL SORRY FOR PEDO OROCHIMARU... BUT YEAH, HE DESERVES TO BE RIPPED A NEW ASSHOLE... ROICK ON!
person Alondra
schedule January 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
HAHAHA awesome!! Great ending!! Look forward to reading more written by you!
person Rose
schedule January 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
What a beautiful ending to a wonderful story. It made me cry and laugh. If you decide to write about the new baby....hehe =) thanks for a wonderful story.
person caidanu
schedule January 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Ok so I remember promising to come back and review once I have finished this fic and yay I'm finally done playing catch up. I do love this story; I had many laughs with fat fox-san and the runt squaud. Poor Naruto getting pregnant again in the end...your absolutely evil. Gaara was such a hot border line sadist in this fic and again I enjoyed the lemons. Neji is such a little egotistical bastard and his plotting O_O Oh he should've known better than to mess with Gaara and Naruto. Wow Sorry this review is a little long winded but I felt you deserved a nice long review for my lack of keeping up with you.
person Damp
schedule January 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
*dies*

It's finally over. NOO!!

-Damp *dies again*
schedule January 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
NOOOOOOOO!!!!! It can't be over!!!! Espically with an ending like that. lol Oh, well. Yay for Kiba, he's kinda cute when he is moody. XD The Runt Squad completely diserved what they got...the twins are just too cute. BTW, I loved Kiko's Corner, but I just can't think of another question to ask.

I'm sad now, but I'll still be here when you post another story. ^_^