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*Falls off chair* Lmao, you and your author notes crack me up! That's like where I used to live. We could hear everything our neighbors were doing at 2am, and I mean EVERYTHING. *shudders* Hehe, yeah but I dunno if the shrinks will ever be able to fix those kinds of nasty visuals unless they've got a high power hose and oxy clean for the brain.
*snickers again* Anyway, loved the chapter, the fighting scene was great. I love the way you portray the characters. I think the interaction growing between Neji and Menma is really cute. And sooo looking forward to seeing how Naru takes care of Gaara. I can't wait to read more. Oh, one more thing...What the bloody hell is up with the freaking squirrels?! I laughed my ass off at your notes about them doing crazyness, and what happens? on my way to work this morning a really little one (I think it was still a baby) runs up to me and starts bein goofy 'n begging for food. It was friggin adorable, weird, but adorable...
Take care, Ja!

that was awsome i dident think that garra and neji were going to get in a fight over the to blonds that was cool and i like how neji is changing keep it up and let me know when the new chapter is done

Yay, Gaara and Neji got to fight! I've been waiting for that scene for awhile now.

^^

-Damp *I can't wait for Neji and Menma to get together!!*

lol Jiraiya was too funny in this chapter. Yay for the fight. ^_^ And it is good to know that Menma might end up happy too.

That was by far the best chapter yet. That was so great. Gaara is so hot!!!! You rock with this story.

What the hell was Neji thinking??? Was the first beating not painful enough?? He should have known not to touch Naruto, but nooo he had to manhandle a pregnant person in front of the father of the kids (instant death)! And Jiraiya drinking a beer in a lounge chair(LOL) priceless! I wish you luck on your job hope you get to go but, keep writing OK!

Thanks for sharing your personal story at the end there... I'm sure all your readers appreciate it... NOT!
Great chapter. Gaara is so insecure, it's getting ridiculous. Neji was crazy. All the drama! heh
update!

I usually don't review but I would really like this fic to be completed. I'm only on chap. 24 so far, I just starteds reading this fic a couple of days ago, but I like what I've read so far. Keep it going!!!

Gaara looked around for something to amplify his hearing. He spotted a discarded glass, grabbing it and placing it against the wall.

Sorry Gaara, that don't work. If there's a crack under the door or something, that usually works best. ^^

-Damp *I've tried that. . .Don't work*

Fuck that's were you end it you are so cruel.