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Dun Dun Dun...the plot thickens. lol The way Gaara was "sneaking" was funny. I hope he kicks Neji's butt again. Then again, I also hope Neji changes his ways so he and Menma can end up together. Menma deserves to be happy. The way you write him is so...so...SWEET! I just want to go awwwwww. ^_^

Another great few chapters I can't wait to see what Gaara does to that meanie Neji. Keep up the good work. =)

Only Jiriaya can find somthing to laugh about while poor Naruto is getting ready to go off. And I Gaara comes in there...well lets just say I hope the insurance is paid up and the hospital is standing by...(LOL)

Woot! I can't wait to see Gaara kick some ass!

This story is freaking wonderful! I laugh every time I read a new chapter. I especially love the parts when Neji is thinking of ways to better himself. It always reminds me of those cell phone commercials, where the dad is getting everyone new phones and saying they're his number one, then he walks out of the house and says "Saving the best for numero uno."
Anyway, completely off topic there, your story is wonderful. Though I would like to see longer chapters, I'd rather have you update more frequently with smaller chapters than have to wait until a longer one is finished.

i loved it and about thoes squirrils well their just plain weird see my problem is the fucking piogeigns they are out to get me i sware other people just walk past em they jump at me and and attack me i'm not making this up but no one believes me until they see it, but what would work most effectively in your war would be a water gun it works wonders on the stupid buggers. lol well ja ne.

gyah...I love you. but i'm hopelessly addicted and I want moooooooooooore... please...i wanna see Naru-chan's puppies!!!!

Geez, I'll say it again...I'm offline for a couple of days, and I miss a chapter. I am glad that you are feeling at least a little better. btw, about the teasing, I know it is just for a laugh...I really don't mind. ^_^

Ok, on to the review.

Gaara is just too sweet for his own good, wanting to surprise Naruto like that. Orochimaru completely deserverd what he got too. Oh, in chapter 28, it was really coincidental that you end it with the line "for the greater good". I am currently re-reading Harry Potter 7, and that line just kinda sticks out like a sore thumb. lol

I can't wait for more!!

Wow! I am LOVING this story so far. It's really well written and it's really very funny. I love Kiko that little brat is soo cute and kinda reminds me of my little cousin, but she's probably more like the foul-mouthed member of the runt squad...I can't remember his name.
Anyways, This stories plot line is great and I love how it fills my taste for smut AND keeps me reading because it's soo cool, your a really great writer! Keep it up! and just for my sake could you put in alittle filler chapter for Kankuro and Kiba? Or Neji and Menma...if it gets that far, BUT only if you want to I don't mind I just thought it'd be cool, so yea...even though Gaara/Naruto is not what I usually read, this story has me totally hooked as I said Keep it Up! And I can't wait for your next update!!

-teania

p.s. this is like one of my longest reviews ever!! haha

The runt squad is just TOO funny. I smile whenever they make an appearance. It so sweet how garra is thiniking as well as doing things to make sure that the kids grow up in a stable environment. Great job on enthralling the nation ^_^