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for Too Many Drinks!

by KoibitoFemme

person musoka-chan
schedule October 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
When i first started reading your fic i didn't like it too much but i stuck with it n im glad i did. It's so funny, i love the OC you've made (Kiko is so kawaii). Please update soon ^-^
schedule October 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Gaara is so F*cking cool I love him and you thanks so much for sharing this is so much fun
schedule October 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
hahahaha i love that kid he sounds like my nephew so funny you see i'm the aunt/baby sitter to bff's kids that tells them "bad" words and laughs when at a strange time they repeat them. like this one time my nephew god love 'em goes (we were walking in the mall) mommy mommy look those two people are gonna do the bad thing on the good foot (i taught him that) i started laughing and his mom my sister in law glares at me and i just laughed harder while the kid starts laughing and she glares at him.it was so funny. well this other time i was in the car with my brother his wife and his kid well this guy cuts us off and the kid is only 4 well he freaking shouts out the window "you fucking idiot you cut off my dad" i was howling. well any way the moral of the story is that i never had to drive the kid anywhere ever again hehe and the reason i do this is because they stick me with the preg people so i use their kids as tourture devices ah sweet revenge lol you will see it is hilarious when the kids swear "corrupt the young" that is my motto and no i don't work in gov't or the advertisment industry lol well ja ne.
person gaara89
schedule October 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
WOOT! Get'm Gaara! Nice chapter. I'll be looking forward for the update.
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schedule October 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
hahaha kawaii kiko!!!he did a good job getting "Giant Panda-san" hahahaha and it serves neji right that he was beat up like that for even thinking of using Naru-chan and his Kits for his own gain. Update again soon!!
person jbjewel
schedule October 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I !LOVE! Kiko!!
schedule October 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Sorry about you not feeling well...get some rest and come back to us full force. You are very talented and I want to read more of your stories. GWS
person LadyWolf
schedule October 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I love Kiko!!!!! That little dude just keeps getting his dumbass daddy in trouble, I love it!!! Right not I think Gaara is the sexiest MF right noW!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
person Rose
schedule October 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
omg I love this story and pairing. Please keep the chapters coming. I am looking forward to more. <3
person gaara89
schedule October 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
lol, nicely done this is so cute!