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for Too Many Drinks!

by KoibitoFemme

schedule October 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Best chapter yet!!!
schedule October 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Ive been reading fics in aff for a While now but when I read this story I had to actually create an account and log my lazy ass in so in other words......THIS FIC ROCKS I FUQN LOVE IT!!!!!!!!!.......you must update or I'll send chibi Gaara to give you big puppy eye looks tyll you melt......enough said.....LUV YA
person bcjink
schedule October 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Are you nuts, how can you think you 'bombed' with this chapter?!
No worries at all, you did a very good job. :)
And the song interwoven between the smut and lemony goodness, was just fine, so again no worries there.
Yay for nosebleed material!!
I hear you about the sugar sub. It can take a little getting used to, and it's tricky to find the balance with some recipies.
Hehe, anyway, I enjoyed it and can't wait to read more. Take care!


person mihoshi
schedule October 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I absolutely love it. I couldn't stop laughing when Kiko was telling is mom about Gaara and Naruto. Keep up the great work.
schedule October 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Definitely a good chapter, and I can't wait to read more.
person gaara89
schedule October 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
i love it so far keep up the good work!
schedule October 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
this chapter is too damn hilarious. X)
person gaara89
schedule October 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
LMAO! Giant naked panda and fat naked fox humping! Awesome mental image there i think im scarred for life. Great chapter!
schedule October 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
haha that was hot!!! ooh i really am enjoying this fic!! Update again soon!!!
schedule October 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Great new chapter, and it was hot.

And this part?

" “But papa is younger than you!” The woman stopped in her tracks.


“What makes you think that?” Her eye was twitching dangerously.


“Cause papa always says you are an old battle ax or calling you obasan!” So that evening two lovers enjoyed their evening together, a little boy learned how to fear women, and a man learned a whole new meaning to the words: nut cracker and blue balls, both involving a very physical demonstration."

It made me LOL.