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for Too Many Drinks!

by KoibitoFemme

schedule September 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
ohhh no that lemon was so up to par with the other one gawd they r so hot my face is all flushed now. i love this story keep it up. ja ne.
schedule September 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
You are on the right track. The mood swings and the horney episodes are insane. I love Gaara fainting.....I laughed so hard I had tears in my eyes. More please.
person FairyNiamh
schedule September 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I'm going to let you know something scary... my elsest daughter (14) is a lot like the way you have writen Sakura... very scary, and is already choosing male subjects to try and get pregnant. When she introduced herself to the teachers this yr, they of course asked her what her goal in life is... her reply, 'To make it where men can get pregnant.'

I am glad that you are showing Naruto having mood swings... because honestly that is just the whole point in pregnacy, to see how far women can be pushed w/o killing all of the male populace.

And YAYA!!! Gaara fainted! (and got hit, serves him right for fainting when Naru-chan needed some kind of support.)

Wonderful update I look forward to the next. Ja Ne.
person gaara89
schedule September 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Haha! Cute! Please update soon!
schedule September 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
-busts out laughing @ this story- omg that's just too funny!! twins!!! just wait til kiba, kankurou and temari hears bout this!!! -laughs harder- ya know? i'm waiting for the appearance of neji and his reaction to seeing naruto and gaara together and on top of that, them having kids. but this story is just too rich! i like it!!
schedule September 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
You, my dear, are an artist!!!!
schedule September 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
hehe once again u nailed it, i think the lemon scene was hot... this story just seems to get better and better.

i did send u an email today, but alas no chapter. It is all explained in the email... but yeah will get around to writing the chapter finished.
hehe and oh well it is not that bead being drunk, some times it is good to just relax and enjoy anything...

hehe well hope you dont have ha hang over tomorrow...

hugs snoopy
person gaara89
schedule September 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Ha! Temari saw them! good work, i hope you update soon!
person gaara89
schedule September 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Ha! Temari saw them! good work, i hope you update soon!
schedule September 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Sorry for not reviewing sooner, I've been away. This last chapter was SOOOOO HOT!!!! Can't wait to see what happens next.

Q: Didn't Gaara lock the door? How did Temari get in?