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for Too Many Drinks!

by KoibitoFemme

schedule September 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hmmm Hawt update! Is this story going to go through Naruto's pregnacy and giving birth (mood swings, attempting to remove Gaara's balls, and the whole hormonal I HATE YOU! or YOU DON'T LOVE ME ANYMORE. Ya know the whole pregnacy routine *g*)

Well it's not my fault that Sasuke's name screams uke... besides Haku is a total uke and when I think of Haku/Naruto I honestly think of two gay guys living as lesbian lovers... ok so my mind is perverted and warped... can't help it. I'm surprised that you had read any of my stories, esp since most of them are HP with a YGO and Original thrown in. THough I hope to start writing more... after See Me and my one shot Sweets entry to KakaNaru community. OK I'm going on and on, forgive me, I just woke up. I look forward to your next update. Ja Ne.
person Ilene
schedule September 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Ok, first of all...YAAAAY! I LURVE UR STORY! second-me wanna haku/naru story, I mean I thought they made an awesome couple, I didn't think sasu/naru until a later in the series, cause sasuke was such a jerk-*weeps* why did they kill off yummy haku, *river of tears*
so yeah, I'm glad he's keeping the baby, abortions are so sad.
WRITE ON! *hands u quadruple layered chocolate cake with cherries on top* damn, now i'm hungry
schedule September 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Keep up the good story. I think something good can come out of this if people can leave them alone.
person katsuyo
schedule September 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
hey trouble...

I love this story. The interaction between Naruto and Gaara is adorable without being over the top.
I'm looking forward to the next installment.

Oh yeah - one more thing... I just I would let you know that I have almost finished working on a one-shot inspired by a scene from your first story and dedicated to yours truly for a story competition on Y! Gallery. The deadline for that is the 10th of October.

Yes - I will post a copy here for you. :D

sincerely,

katsuyo
person katsuyo
schedule September 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oops... my mistake... the story is inspired by your second story - U.K.E., not your first.

- katsuyo
schedule September 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
haha.. this chapter was so cute. =^^=
schedule September 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
OK Sweet update, though I would have loved to see Gaara faint, Oh well at least Kanky fainted. I look forward to your next update.

Now on with your idea... Pairing should be Sasuke/Naruto with Naruto as the crossdessing seme (We already know he looks damn good as a girl after all) and Sasuke as the uke... cause you know his name screams uke... sasUKE... see what I mean?

*goes back into hiding to write promised stories and updates.* Ja Ne.
person Ravie
schedule September 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
i love this fic! i think you should do a Haku/Naruto since there aren't that many out there. crossdressing huh? =^.^= yaoi bubbles! ok im gonna leave you alone now...
person word_slave
schedule September 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hey!
It's me, I just caught this one. And I like it, except I'm definitely not an Mpreg kinda person. But I think it's great and what's funny is I was thinking about a menma story too. I just caught the episodes yesterday. Made me ball like a little girl. Slave
schedule September 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
holy shit that last chappie your evil, *sigh* but i still love you. and aren't we all horn-dogs at heart? lol Ja ne.