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for Too Many Drinks!

by KoibitoFemme

schedule December 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Yay, I'm finally back. It is really hard to read fanfics when, 1) your internet connection goes out, 2) it is the holidays, and 3) your dad has a triple bypass. Thankfully, he is doing much better. This is the first thing I wanted to read when I finally got back online. I can't believe I missed so much...just one more chapter? All I can say is NOOOOOOOO. lol BUT, I will read anything you write from now on, and I am anxiously awaiting the next chapter.
person JJ
schedule December 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
i love this story u came up with i hope it doesent end any time soon
schedule December 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
OMG OMG OMFG Kankurou Kiba love. That was so great. yeah kanky asked kiba to marry him. *dance around* I'm so happy. That's what the story I'm writing is about.
Gaara's family is so cute, I love the twins.

Well done.
person kagomegirl021
schedule December 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
aww poor naru-chan and family i cant wait to see what happens in part 2. i'll be sad to see this end.
person Damp
schedule December 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I can't believe this fic is ending. . .

THE BABIES ARE SUBER CUTE!

-Damp *cries*
schedule December 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
That was Fantastic. You did a great job with those last two chapters, well the whole story really. I loved the Kiba and Kankurou part in the end that was so great, Kanky all mushy about the babies. Great job all round thanks so much for sharing this story with us, I enjoyed the ride.
schedule December 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Yay! I'm glad that the painful part is over. And the twins are so cuuuuuuuute! I like the names ^_^
person solitare1
schedule December 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I laughed so hard with this last chapter....I knew that shoe had the perverts name on it! And the little one that wanted one of the puppies was sooo cute! I love this story and I'll be sorry to see it end since it has given so many hours of laughter, but I know you got another under your hat (atleast I hope so).

And yes, please make more chapters for me on my story I would like to see how it turns out.

And if I were to braid my hair they would probably think I had LOST MY MIND! So at least you get a age complement instead of a curse.
schedule December 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
You are officially my favorite comedy writer!! I laughed so hard I cried. You Are The Queen of Comedy! All Hail The Queen!

Merry Christmas to You!
schedule December 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
*wipes tears* what a wonderful chapter. The picture of the baby's is adorable. Thanks for updating you made my day. =)