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for Too Many Drinks!

by KoibitoFemme

person Damp
schedule December 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I simply love the way you made everyone suffer an injury during the whole babies coming out. Nothing made me laugh harder then that!

-Damp *Are you going to write more, or are you going to write an epilogue no?*
schedule December 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
that was awsome merry christmas to you too....oh and poor gaara yesh that has got to hurt but all in all i found it funny. yes well funny story i brought my gf home to meet my family over christmas well my parents know and accept and all but my grandmother is another story she's "old-fashioned" so to speak and i wanted to surprise my family so i didn't know that my gran was gunna be there so who was it that opens the door my little brother (what a little ass) well he say hi and who's that i told him it was my gf well he turns and hollers to the entire house "hey sis is here with her girl friend" well my gran peeks throug the kitchen to the front hall and glares at my preggers gf and tsks at us so my gf gets all emotional trying to hold everything back all i can say is we should have stayed home cause this is gunna be one awsoMe christmas. merry fucking christmas grandma ah what have i gotten myself into troublesome. well ja ne hope you have a good one.
person mls
schedule December 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
love it keep up the good work!!!!!!!
schedule December 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
where did you go? miss the updates. If you don't update have a Merry Christmas and a Happy new year =) <3
schedule December 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
hahahahahahaha that was soooo funny.....and i know right i am totally shika but she isn't all bad she's really artsy though lol man i can wait for the next chapter ja.
person qwerty
schedule December 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
o.O Naruto's water broke!
schedule December 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
all i hav to say is LMFAOFOLF.
schedule December 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hey it's me Rose. Made a account so I could post stories of my own one day, lol. I really loved this chapter, it was full of sex. woohoo. and OMG!!!! his water broke hehe can't wait for more.
person Damp
schedule December 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
OH OH OH OIH OH OH OH OH OH OH OH O OH OH OH OHOH HO O H OH OH OH O HO H OH OH OH O H OH!!!!!!

BABY TIME!!!!!!

-Damp *Eww, I hate babies*
schedule December 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Yay, a new chapter!!! That lemon was really hot, I think I might need to turn on the AC. XD The thing with Shuei had me laughing...and, YAY for Kiko's Corner!!!!! I like GIANT PANDA SAN too!!!! lol ^_^ Thanks for the dedication.