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for Too Many Drinks!

by KoibitoFemme

schedule December 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hi sweetie just letting you know I was thinking about you and hope everything is going well. *Huggies*
schedule December 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
ahnnnnn! yes! update! an update! good luck on the belly dancing stuff... because i'll never ever get to miss a flat belly coz i don't have one... yet. urgh... i hate dieting, but no pain no gain! Hey i've already put the missing 5th chapter in A grain of truth!!! about you losing someone you love every year, that's a tough one, but i can't say that i understand... since i've never known my relatives long enough for me to cry over them even if they die... and my father was a bastard since he just upped and disapppeared. did i mention that he's japanese? it's a trend for them to leave pregnant filipinas to be single mothers and go back to japan never to appear in front of them again, they don't even care about the shit they leave behind, like their unborn kids for example. i really hate guys who're afraid of responsibility or just don't care. anyway the story's good! keep it comin'!
person Rose
schedule December 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I have really enjoyed the last few chapters. Sorry I haven't reviewed. *don't beat me* But anyways I was heart broken to see Gaara like that. Please keep up the good work. <3 this story to death.
person JJ
schedule December 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
that was awsome about time garra got it through his head im glad that happend. I love your story so let me know when the next chapter is done
schedule December 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
*wipes away happy tears* How moving! Can't wait until the next installment
person Damp
schedule December 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
“Koi I am willing to become an entirely different person if it will ensure I could wake up to your face, your body, your soul everyday of my life. I don't just want to be the father of your kids. I want to be your partner in life until the day we both die. Uzumaki Naruto.... will you marry me?”

I KNEW Gaara would eventually ask for Naruto's hand!!! AWW!!!!! If I ever get married, I want my soulmate to tell me that!!

-Damp *dies*
person Anon
schedule November 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
good chapter
update
schedule November 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I WANT ONE LIKE GAARA!! He knows how to talk to someone he loves!! So Temari was the comedy relief this time. She is crazy and I like her that way.
schedule November 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
awww im so glad they are back together and ooh gaara was so sweet with how he asked naruto to marry him!!! Update again soon!! i am loving this so much!!!! i'll be sad when its over!!
schedule November 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
That was so great. I love you for writing this story. I've been working on a story for a while now were Kankurou and Kiba get Married. Love is so great.