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good luck in getting the job. this chapter was soooo emotional lol but i loved it ^^.
omg the piegions aren't after me anymore i love you. ahhhh pregnant people can get sooo horny...i told you about my other pregger friend well she is bi like me...okay so here is the story....i'm in my room on my laptop reading stuff (when i'm on the comp i play my music really loud) she walks in to my room unbenonced to me (i also like to lay on my stomach on the floor) she sneaks over to me and like sits down on me and starts to "tenderly" rub my back well neither of us have had any in a while to end it non to dramaiclly one thing lead to another and i'm no longer single and my gf is pregnant.....wow i manage to get myself in really deep REALLY fast another thing on my list to cross off lol geez. and i hope your dad feels better i know when i messed up my car i was pretty pissed after i was fine execpt for a broken coller bone but the car cost me some serious cash lol. love the story can't wait for the next chapter

Best chapter to date. Well done.

O_o I was NOT expecting that to happen. All I can say is....Menma can kick some serious butt. lol Good luck on the South Korea job. And, although you said he was ok, I hope your dad feels better.

I have a new respect for Menma he e too tough!! I think Gaara and Neji are going to have to pull out all the stops to get these two blonds back. I wish both of them the best! I won't gruess you plots anymore(smile). At least I'll try not to.

hey loved the chapter, everyone seem to want a little piece of naruto's ass.
sorry to hear about ur dad, u seem to have a lot on ur plate these days, but i am glad that at least somethings are going ur way, i will cross all my finger and toes for ur next interview.

yeah my story hasent gotten any further i do appologise ( think thats how u spell it) i am not a good writer at the moment, anways got a my first game of the season on sunday so been practicing like mad with the team, altough they seem to speak more cantonese that english.

sorry i am rabbling, i wish u all the best wit ur interview and everything, cant wait for another update and keep ur eyes open for an email should be getting my next chapter done soon. if anyone can give me my damn muse back.

big hugs snoopy

fuck. i wet my pants... and it's not piss, mind you... heheheh pervert writer. great story keep it up! although why is Neji being such a prick? hn, he's just confused and his ambitions are blinding his heart!!!!

“Hn, whats funny is you two butt pirates getting all mushy in front of the playground.... Haven't you ever heard of pussy?!”

This whole chapter just made my day a whole lot better.

-Damp *Still laughing*

HAHAHAHAHA!!!! This is the BEST chapter yet! I still can't stop laughing. As for your side story, I say do all of it, if that makes sense...a kinky lemon with some WAFF thrown in on the side.

Ok, I think I'm through laughing now....nope, not quite...HAHAHAHAHA!!!!!!

Those kids kill me!!! About the Neji thing, Menma should find out Neji turned Gaara in to the news as a woman beater, he beats the crap out of Neji for hurting his cousin, Neji comes to the realization that it is Menma he can have a decent relationship with not Naruto(too troublesome) and steals him away to Vegas for a very romantic weekend or something.

nice chapter!