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by emeraldfire84

person puppydog
schedule November 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
DO THE SEQUAL,DO THE SEQUAL! DO IT,DO IT!
schedule November 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh man, you GOTTA write a threesome sequel. Don't lose it in plot bunny limbo! Naruto's initial reaction would be hilarious and I want to see if Sai can get Naruto to 'bond' with him as well. XD

You soooo gotta write it from Naruto's pov, and then drag out the initial revelation at what Sai and Sakura are planning. Naruto's cluelessness, and the readers being 'in' on the joke would make comedy gold. I can see it now Naruto: (Why are Sai and Sakura whispering to each other?) (A party at Sakura's house huh? Hey, why's Sai here?) (What's that rope for?) (Why's my drink taste funny?) (Where is this mysterious foreboding feeling coming from?) LMAO
person ashez
schedule November 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh, definitly go with the threesome idea. It'd be great to read a threesome with sakura and naruto that doesn't have sasuke in it (can't stand the guy).
person Anon
schedule November 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
You could always do the threesome as Sakura having a dream, if you don't want to change the dynamics too much from what you established here. Although, I think a threesome would be really funny. Considering Naruto's reaction to the 'yaoi' version of sexy no jutsu, he's bound to FREAK OUT. lmao
person LadyApollonia
schedule November 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh please! Oh please! Oh please! Oh please! Oh please! Oh please! Oh please! Oh please! OH PLEASE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! DO A SEQUEL!!!!!!!!!! You write beautifully & that would just be so hot!!!
schedule October 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
so awesome,so sad it is over becasue their are rarely Sai sakura fics but I loved it none the less. Jo
schedule October 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
O.O

THIS IS A REALLY GOOD FIC! 5/5!!!

XD, anyways you have nice character development and twisties. This is seriously very good, the way you describe everything going on and how it affected the characters and their moods and thoughts. XD Couldnt stop laughing at chapter 1 where Sai talks to Kakashi. LOL

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plz.......Publish moooooorreeeeeeeeeee, dont let the plot bunnies die......THEY NEED A VOICE AND THATS U! XD

I vote for naru/saku/sai
person edelta88
schedule October 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
woot wonderful ending and yes dragging Naruto into this would be freaquing awesome not to metion hilarious. I can see it now, Sai/Sakura double team Naruto lol
person Foenix
schedule October 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
If you're taking requests, I definitely want to see a Sai/Saku/Naru threesome. Especially if it's as sexy as the ones you've written for the original team! Plus, I can't wait to read Naruto's initial reaction . . .
person puppydog
schedule October 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Please do the threesome. I would love 2 c it.