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by emeraldfire84

person akasha
schedule October 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
this fic was very much a work of art all it's own... but it would seem rather incomplete if naruto was left out of the picture. the idea was for the whole team to be bonded, right? at least that is what the summary leads you to believe. so i'm all for a follow-up. it would just be an added bonus for me to read a great naruXsakuXsai lemon!
person ninjakitty
schedule October 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
hmmmm squeal would be goooood.
Your writing is fantastic
person Silverstar871
schedule October 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wow! Greatest lemon I've read by far. Hot too. Lol, you actually gave me ideas. I mean...paintbrush? Seriously never thought that could be used as an erotic tool. Simply talented.
person roxnroll
schedule October 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
That was just too awesome. And yeah- Sai/Saku/Naru 3some- Do it. Yeah!
Rox
person Lunar84
schedule October 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I would really like to see you continue this in a Naru/Saku/Sai Threesome. Unfortunately though, I am not a fan of yaoi. Yes I know everyone is now cursing my name and throwing things at their computers. So perhaps if you made it like Party of Three (which is the best smutty smut I've ever laid eyes on) it will be awesome! Just my little two cents. Great job keep these stories coming.
person Laini
schedule October 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
AWESOME! And yes a threesome b/t those three sounds interesting,i dont think ive ever read one before,at least not to my memory anyway lol. Loved the fic,the Sai and Sakura interaction was very cute. Keep up the great work girl! and dont forget about that Sai/Sakura/Naruto sequel!
person Toshar
schedule October 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Great work... you got me tingling with anticipation! Guess what my expectation for the next chapter does... :-)
person Lunar84
schedule October 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Amazing! I truly hope you decide to continue this story. I am all for a lengthy fic focusing on these two. I never really thought about these two as a couple but your talented writing has turned me into a fan. Yours was one of the best lemon scenes I have ever had the pleasure of reading. You seem to capture the personality of Sai and Sakura perfectly. You have amazing talent and your story flows beautifully. This will definately be added to my list of favorites. Keep up the good work.
schedule October 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Another great story!!! Can't wait for the next chapter.
person gaara89
schedule October 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh my god this is so cute! Please do continue soon!