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ooooh, another chappie, please don't leave this unfinfished and them unsure of where they are going to be, I read an awesome fic once with these two but you never knew what they were at the end, please, finish it up with these 2. Love this always!! jo

For some reason I expect the next line to be Sai saying, "Ah well it was a good decision to make it permanent then." LOL I'm glad there's more to this! Looking forward to the fallout.

Oh. My. God. That was... wow. I was so focused on the story, that my vision has blurred slightly... it's fine now though. But seriously, that was amazing, and i am eagerly awaiting an update... if there is one. I'm assuming there is because it would suck to just leave the story hanging like that. It was almost like i was personally whitnessing this... It could be that i was so drawn to this because i've always wanted someone to draw a protrait of me or something, kind of like that. Maybe not naked... but i dunno. I am completely and utterly impressed. This is definatly one of the best fanfic's i've ever read. and i've read a lot. Maybe not as many as some people... but it certainly seems like a lot. So... congrats! You are an awesome adult fanficion writer! Well, i think you are! Keep up the GREAT work!

Amy

Ooooh, What did he paint (besides Sakura)? That chapter was amazing, just like the others. That whole body paining is one of the most sensual things I have read. I am looking forward to the next chapter.

WAGH! What was it?! lol. Damn cliffies..>.< hehe. Favorite fic of all time so far,update ASAP. ^_^

this story is so amazing and touching. your an awsome writer and i hope you have time to continue beacuse i really wonder how things are going tow ork out and what exactly did he paint on her.

Ahhhh! what is it!!!!!
Oh man I love that chapter, it is just, just, Gorgious is about the best word to use there. Oh i could feel the intimacy rolling off your words. Beautiful, just beautiful!
Can't wait for the next chapter!!! I am officialy addicted

Hey, wasn't this based off of a hentai doujinshi? Not that, basing off of it was a bad thing, it made it neat if you've read the doujinshi in question. It was really well written. Will there be more chapters? Sai's defintily become smitten with her...

I'm not normally one for yaoi, but this really calls for a sequel (or even an outtake) where Sai tries this with Naruto. If you don't want it in story you could always write on as an outtake. The results would be freakin hilarious. Naruto: No wonder he always calls mine small! LMAO I'd be interested in that threesome possiblity joked about in the fic as well. Damn, would that be funny.

I would have logged on but I forgot my username, and can't be bothered to search, just took a time out read chap 3 as the HAWTNESS was getting to me. ;p.
Kinda ruined reading, as I spent most of my time thinking of how someone could put into words the rawness of everything SEX.
Gonna go back and reread again without praising your excellent writing skills over each sentence.

Please write a Sakura/Sasuke.... please consider my request any plot, or no plot at all. Just include hot smexing (as you call it)... as you've guess I'm a sasu-saku fan but love to read other Sakura pairing as long as it is written well, good grammar-spelling-some sort of plot etc.... But yours has that extra zest of smuttyness..;p
(gosh i sound like a perv)
You write like some of those experienced-well educated- Harry Potter older(adult)fans who write on AFF.net (check out Draco&Hermione). And seein on your profile you're only college student (assuming your mid 20-30s) its unbelievable. What you wrote is much better than some of the romance novels I've read.

Keep up the good work.