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November 27, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Continue with the story, I love it, it made me laugh my pants wet...!!! ^O^
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January 5, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Let me just start with first, just started and now up to date, loving the story, and can't wait for the next chapter. Dirty Itachi. Tsk tsk tsk. Lol aldo keep an I on your grammer? Oh well either way lovin' it!!!!!!
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October 3, 2009 at 12:00 AM
ohh...never use a shoe box.fired damn now what,sasuke still didnt answer the question either what to do what to do. how hes stuck with his perverted older brother who may get him at any time i hope the best for sasuke and his health and ease at evading itachi.hope you can update soon
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March 24, 2009 at 12:00 AM
noes wat?!! did his dad do something to minato??
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January 27, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Love your story! Keep up the good work!
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January 27, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Ch. 2
q=que
dump ass=dumb ass
I thought that the grammer needed work and that you should use a dictionary instead of guessing the word and letting spell check fix it for you. But other than that everything was decent, especially the characterization.
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dump ass=dumb ass
I thought that the grammer needed work and that you should use a dictionary instead of guessing the word and letting spell check fix it for you. But other than that everything was decent, especially the characterization.
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January 27, 2009 at 12:00 AM
shouldnt he be one of the first people to know hes fired,but then again sasuke needs to know too.i dont see why mikotos so sad.hmm...hope you can update soon
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January 16, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Oh my! I can't wait to read more. Sakura looks more than crazy in this story, hopes she founds a BDSM partner and let our poor sexy Naruto alone. lol. I read all the chapters in one go (couldn't stop myself!), I really like your way of writting.
Continue with the good work!
Continue with the good work!
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January 2, 2009 at 12:00 AM
wow shits getting messed up for them but thats what feelings do ne.knew itachi wouldnt be happy about hearing were sasuke is,hes already spitting lightning.and these sex talks really that just sucks for both sasuke and naruto ouch noone wants to hear that especially with your principal drunk and in the room,now she just knows to much even if you have blackmail on her.cant wait for updates
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December 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wow, this shit actually received 101 reviews? Honey, I like where the story's going but there's too many grammar and spelling mistakes littered in every chapter. Find yourself a better betta that isn't kissing your ass like every numb nut that reads your story wishing for more.