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for The 'Million Dollar' Man

by brook13baby13

schedule September 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
OOOOh I love when Naruto has the upper hand. Please make him drive Sasuke up the wall. It would be cool if he was arrogant as Sasuke and infuriate him with his tactics. Does he look like he is older than Sasuke or does he have a baby face. HEHEHE I would love to read that Sasuke considered him some kind of pipsqueak and he could drive him nuts like he does his relatives. But either way I am sure you have something good in store!
schedule September 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
well heres my revew. update pleas. i like it so far.
person Nanaka
schedule September 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
ok i've only read the first few lines and i gotta say your beta sux for not noticing wracked... Wracked is just another version of the word rack, which is so not the word you're going for here... the word you're going for is Wrecked... all right i gunna go read the story now
person Nanaka
schedule September 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
ok finished reading and aside from the whole wracked/wrecked thing i liked it, loved the end, and can't wait to read more
schedule September 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
oh i'll review, hehe this sounds like it will be very interesting, can't wait to see how naruto is suppose to help sasuke's attitude, :P can't wait to see what u write, please update soon
person Nyuchan
schedule September 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hehe ^_^
Te-he "Brat"-Sasuke rules!
I think it's a good start and i'm really in for more giggles.

schedule September 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh boy... excellent beginning. I cannot wait to see where you take it. Should be good!
schedule September 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
XD Nice! Sounds like this is going to be fun!