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for The 'Million Dollar' Man

by brook13baby13

schedule December 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I hope you get your writing MOJO back soon!! I just found this fic & I love it!! So plz I hope you don't give up on it, and continue.
schedule November 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This was a good chapter. I'm so happy Naruto and Sasuke finally did something.:) I hope they get to continue another time or night. I also love Gakuen Heaven it's my favorite. I've got lots of pics for my desktop of them all. I finally got a chance to see the other a few months ago and loved it as well. You've got GREAT taste. GREAT stories as well!!!!!!
schedule November 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I love it! You really are a good writer that gives one good insperation. Keep it up, can't wait to see what will happen next! :)
person Anon
schedule November 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
YAY more.
person Anon
schedule November 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
That was cute. Please use spell and grammar check in the future though. The grammatical errors take away from the quality of the story. Wonderful job otherwise.
person hisoka
schedule November 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
talk about a mood ruiner,sasukes probly pissed i dont know who at but it may be everyone knowing how he is.poor naruto got into sasukes pants only to have them pulled up over his head thanks to drunk people and thier happy selves.hope you can update soon
person sameyler
schedule November 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
omg... lol thats just funny and great. really good update.

and that sucks bout your dog mine just had 5 puppies. and ya i know i did the same thing with kiki and butters those are my cats we had fixed two months ago, i think they still hate me.
person sameyler
schedule October 12, 2008 at 12:00 AM
wow that was sogood.i cant wait to read more please update.

huh i wish my storys were this good.
person hisoka
schedule September 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
im still trying to figure out why the chapter was named the blond is mine.itachi is such a creepy bastard,i feel bad for sasuke no more going to family when you had a bad dream ne.hope you can update soon
person MiraMira
schedule September 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Ahh! Oh no! We've been thwarted by disclaimers!! *shakes fist*