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September 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
So far so good!
Can't wait 'till the next chapter!
Can't wait 'till the next chapter!
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September 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Good story! Can't wait to see what happenes at Naruto's house. Does Itachi really have a thing for Sasuke? Guess I will have to wait for the next chapter to find out. I was wondering if you could let me know when you update next? Thanks.
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September 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wait, so I'm confused. I just finished reading chapter 4 and at the end Sasu calls Naruto by his name. How did he learn Naru's name? Did I miss something? He refused to ask his name in the kitchen, so at that point he obviously didn't know. I don't remember a name exchange with cosmo's revealing in the bedroom tossel...he wrote teh leter to the 'moron,' but he could just be calling Naruto a moron and refusing to use his name at that point...I'll just have to re-read it again...ok, not a bad deal. :)
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September 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Aww~ naru-chan's so sweet! Could I beta for you? There are a lot of spelling errors...Let me know whether you want me to beta for you or not. My e-mail's keitaros_kero_neko at yahoo dot com
I love teh story line; it's so cute!!! I think my alltime favorite line so far is the "You sound pretty badass...well, except for the reading Cosmo thing..." rofdfl
I love teh story line; it's so cute!!! I think my alltime favorite line so far is the "You sound pretty badass...well, except for the reading Cosmo thing..." rofdfl
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August 31, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Nice plot, nice story, grammar just a bit off :( (I hate giving people criticisms)
Keep up the good work! Update soon!
Keep up the good work! Update soon!
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August 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
it took me a while but he just confessed hes into the male annatamy just like sasuke,and now sasukes gonna bug about it.sasuke should get a lock on his room door yano one of the chain ones that you can only open from the inside.hope you can update soon
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August 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
great story so far... it'll be interesting to see what happens next :)
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August 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
oh... :( I don't know what to say
first of all I have to say that I do like uchihacest, but I didn't like the cliffhanger/change of the plot... I'm very aware that this is your fic but mmm... I don't know... I liked this, and now I feel that from being a NaruSasu is gonna be more about the relationship between the brothers...
first of all I have to say that I do like uchihacest, but I didn't like the cliffhanger/change of the plot... I'm very aware that this is your fic but mmm... I don't know... I liked this, and now I feel that from being a NaruSasu is gonna be more about the relationship between the brothers...
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August 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
thatts painful.to know your sleeping near someone who wants to screw you and finding the evidence.wonder how sasukes gonna sleep now(probly with his door locked if he doesnt already)he doesnt seem that mad at naruto but who knows naruto still needs revenge for that glue insident if he even plans on it.hope you can update soon
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August 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Demanding reviews before you update your story is really tacky.