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for The 'Million Dollar' Man

by brook13baby13

schedule August 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
DUM DUM DUUUUM! What a chapter, I was NOT expecting that! KYAAA!

Great fic!
I can't wait for the next update!
Keep up the good work ^_^
person Nanin
schedule August 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I'm hypnotized by your type of writing.
It keeps me entertained through out the whole story, a feat most people can't do.

I laughed at the 'Itachi is masterbating to my baby photos!' situation. xD

I can't wait 'till the next chapter!
schedule August 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
OMG!!!! Surprise, Surprise!!!!!! I thought Naruto was Itachi's friend. Wonder what Itachi will do when he talks to Naruto?!!! This is getting so EXCITING!!!!!!!!
person hisoka
schedule August 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
what a great way to avoid loosing,give the credit to someone else.but what can they do now that itachis got inside info.hope you can update soon
person hisoka
schedule July 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
hope naruto doesnt sleep in that bed after what sakura did.does naruto have any allies?i always thought hed have haku and zabuza(or someone really evil like tayuya too) as friends he could call upon.hope he can win against sasuke and his friends but then again he probably knows their already planning something.hope you can update soon
schedule July 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This has gotten very competitive. It's funny too. When will Sasuke learn and what the hell will it take. He is so defiant. I love all your stories!!!!!!!!!!
person Dragon7
schedule July 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Both your two-shot and one-shot sound grate I can't wait for you to post them so I can read them. Anyway this chapter was very funny.
schedule July 12, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Hey! Sorry I didn't review the first couple of pages, but I had to on this one. Naruto will now get the trust of Sasuke and may get close himself. I'm really enjoying this story.
schedule July 12, 2008 at 12:00 AM
That was a fun chapter. With all these dates, Sasuke's bound to get jealous if he isn't already. I like that you put Sai in it as well as Gaara. Hope to see alittle more of them too.
person Dragon7
schedule July 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I can't wait to see how things turn out in the next chapter.