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November 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I like the story like i hope you continue the story soon I hope thie review will make it.
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November 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
kool! this story rocks! pls udpate soon
oh btw, i read the sex story... that was hilarious!
gawd who would name their dog like that.. hahaha
enywei, pls update soon... plsssss
oh btw, i read the sex story... that was hilarious!
gawd who would name their dog like that.. hahaha
enywei, pls update soon... plsssss
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November 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
hahaha that short story was hilarious oh and i like that story i can't wait to see what happens next
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November 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
i enjoyed second chapter.
can't wait for the next chapter!
can't wait for the next chapter!
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November 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Loved it I can't wait to read more so update soon and thanks for the e-mail.
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November 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Grate chapter!!!! I'm so happy that you are back and writing again. I can’t wait to read the next chapter so please keep on writing and UPDATE SOON.
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November 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Nice story!!
P.S. LOL!! Like your short story. ;) Made me laugh.
P.S. LOL!! Like your short story. ;) Made me laugh.
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November 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
LOL OMG that was too much I had to read that bonus story to my sister and we both couldn't stop laughing. I loved the chapter but I think I liked that bonus story more.
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November 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
DeliciouslyGood: Omg!! That was soo funny!! Haha!! Sasuke being ordered around!!!
Sasuke: SHUT UP!!! I'm not letting that dobe order me around! I'm an UCHIHA!
Naruto: Sasuke.. u better do what I tell u or does some1 need some spanking?
DeliciouslyGood: Bwahaha!! What's that Sasuke? Need some spanking now do u?
Sasuke: Shut up! Perv! *blushes*
DeliciouslyGood: Ooh!!! Sasuke's blushing!! U like spanking now do u? Ooh!! Being dominated just turns u on huh?
Sasuke: NO IT DOESN'T! *blushes even more*
DeliciouslyGood: Oh really? Then what's that?
Sasuke: What's what...
DeliciouslyGood: That. *points down*
Sasuke: Eh? *looks down then blushes and tries to hide the "thing"*
DeliciouslyGood: Haha!! I told u!! U do like being dominated!!
Sasuke: It's just a book though...
DeliciouslyGood: Yeah.. a book..about.. hmmm.. let me see now... *grabs the book and looks at cover page* 10 ways to show that you want "it"? Hmm.. and the pic in the front of the book just shows that I am right... Tsk Tsk Tsk... who knew that an Uchiha wanted to be dominated! I thought Uchiha's were the dominating ones... not the other way around...
Sasuke: *grabs book from DeliciouslyGood's hands and hides it in a safe place* Well... It's just for me to find out the... clues! Yeah! The clues to know if they want it or not!
DeliciouslyGood: Right.. anywho... to put that aside...
Sasuke: I'm not kidding! It really is just for me to know if my uke wants it or not!
DeliciouslyGood: *talks softly* More of like a book for u to find out what u should to to get "it" *snickers*
Sasuke: Hey! I heard that! And you're soo wrong!
Naruto: Really now Sasu-Chan~? Would u like me to test your statement?
Sasuke: Back off u perv!
Naruto: Awww!!! Now now Sasu-Chan~ It won't hurt if u listen and follow my every instruction *grins*
Sasuke: AHhh!! *starts running away from pervy ppl*
Naruto: Wait!! Sasu-Chan~! Come back!!! I haven't even done anything to u yet!! I won't bite u...!! Much that is... hehe!! *chases after Sasu-Chan~*
DeliciouslyGood: Oh well.. that may take long x) But anyways.. just wanted to say that I really love this story ^^ And uhh.. could I possibly be your beta? x) I really find this story interesting and would like to help ^^
My email addy is: unapprochable_girl@yahoo.com.au
Sasuke: SHUT UP!!! I'm not letting that dobe order me around! I'm an UCHIHA!
Naruto: Sasuke.. u better do what I tell u or does some1 need some spanking?
DeliciouslyGood: Bwahaha!! What's that Sasuke? Need some spanking now do u?
Sasuke: Shut up! Perv! *blushes*
DeliciouslyGood: Ooh!!! Sasuke's blushing!! U like spanking now do u? Ooh!! Being dominated just turns u on huh?
Sasuke: NO IT DOESN'T! *blushes even more*
DeliciouslyGood: Oh really? Then what's that?
Sasuke: What's what...
DeliciouslyGood: That. *points down*
Sasuke: Eh? *looks down then blushes and tries to hide the "thing"*
DeliciouslyGood: Haha!! I told u!! U do like being dominated!!
Sasuke: It's just a book though...
DeliciouslyGood: Yeah.. a book..about.. hmmm.. let me see now... *grabs the book and looks at cover page* 10 ways to show that you want "it"? Hmm.. and the pic in the front of the book just shows that I am right... Tsk Tsk Tsk... who knew that an Uchiha wanted to be dominated! I thought Uchiha's were the dominating ones... not the other way around...
Sasuke: *grabs book from DeliciouslyGood's hands and hides it in a safe place* Well... It's just for me to find out the... clues! Yeah! The clues to know if they want it or not!
DeliciouslyGood: Right.. anywho... to put that aside...
Sasuke: I'm not kidding! It really is just for me to know if my uke wants it or not!
DeliciouslyGood: *talks softly* More of like a book for u to find out what u should to to get "it" *snickers*
Sasuke: Hey! I heard that! And you're soo wrong!
Naruto: Really now Sasu-Chan~? Would u like me to test your statement?
Sasuke: Back off u perv!
Naruto: Awww!!! Now now Sasu-Chan~ It won't hurt if u listen and follow my every instruction *grins*
Sasuke: AHhh!! *starts running away from pervy ppl*
Naruto: Wait!! Sasu-Chan~! Come back!!! I haven't even done anything to u yet!! I won't bite u...!! Much that is... hehe!! *chases after Sasu-Chan~*
DeliciouslyGood: Oh well.. that may take long x) But anyways.. just wanted to say that I really love this story ^^ And uhh.. could I possibly be your beta? x) I really find this story interesting and would like to help ^^
My email addy is: unapprochable_girl@yahoo.com.au
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November 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I curious about the method he's going to use to change Sasuke & how much he's getting paid. It must be obscene if it's coming from Itachi.