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for The 'Million Dollar' Man

by brook13baby13

person Billie
schedule November 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Okay, what's going on w/ the crazy pink bitch.
person mr. L
schedule November 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
u know what...i just made my day...good job! i was waiting for this chapter for a long time and it was worth the wait...keep up the gud work..
person Ellie342
schedule November 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Are we going to see Naru/Ita action. That would be so hot. Sorry, I just think Itachi is so hot.

I still don't know what Naruto is going to do w/ Sasuke. I'm hoping for something kinky. At least that's what it looked like from their first meeting.

Thanks for the update. Hopefully we'll get another one soon.

Ja ne.
person mr. L
schedule October 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
i'm like...where's the second chapter?...then i like...freakin' bros...
person Damp
schedule October 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Evil brothers suck!!!

-Damp (Even though I'M the oldest, and I have only brothers. They're my SLAVES >8) )
person Dragon7
schedule October 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Sibling are a pain in the ASS I have two one older and another younger and it HELL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!LOL I hope that this is a NaruSasu because their are way to many SasuNaru stories out their and not enough NaruSasu stories. I really hope your EVIL bother gives you tower for the computer back really really soon.
person Anon
schedule October 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
..........damn him!
schedule October 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I'm interested so far, but before I continue reading, I'd like to know: NaruSasu or SasuNaru. I'm really not a fan of NaruSasu stories at all.
person dark
schedule October 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
you know wend you update the comp is tent to erease the info you have on less you have it save on an external disc or somthing he is evill.

ps like the st
person kaesaku
schedule October 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
love the story!
enjoyed the concept!
very interesting, do hope you'd continue it!
write soon~ :)