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April 12, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I love it!
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January 25, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Holy shit. NO room for improvement. Too amazing already.
No kidding, that was hands-down one of the sexiest pieces of fanfiction I have ever read, in like 7 years of reading fanfiction. And it wasn't due to some kinky plot or scenario, it was just straight-up sex. You are awesome. I think what helped make it so great was like you didn't use the same cliche'd text conventions that every single yaoi writer seems to use in their stories, even some of the best. You know what I mean - there are certain phrases and ways of describing things that anyone who has ever read any bit of yaoi fanfiction is already familiar with. And I don't really remember reading any of that in this story. Rather than your typical scenario where you just paste in your favorite characters, you seemed to really address how they were feeling in those moments. Just seeing how sexy *they* thought it was brought me into the reality of how sexy *I* thought it was.
Freaking awesome.
Also, though it doesn't seem like much, there is enough of a plot here to make the story have its own theme, and give it believability. And the ending made me laugh. Raido likes girls and Genma. That could have pretty much been the title, if you had wanted it to be.
No kidding, that was hands-down one of the sexiest pieces of fanfiction I have ever read, in like 7 years of reading fanfiction. And it wasn't due to some kinky plot or scenario, it was just straight-up sex. You are awesome. I think what helped make it so great was like you didn't use the same cliche'd text conventions that every single yaoi writer seems to use in their stories, even some of the best. You know what I mean - there are certain phrases and ways of describing things that anyone who has ever read any bit of yaoi fanfiction is already familiar with. And I don't really remember reading any of that in this story. Rather than your typical scenario where you just paste in your favorite characters, you seemed to really address how they were feeling in those moments. Just seeing how sexy *they* thought it was brought me into the reality of how sexy *I* thought it was.
Freaking awesome.
Also, though it doesn't seem like much, there is enough of a plot here to make the story have its own theme, and give it believability. And the ending made me laugh. Raido likes girls and Genma. That could have pretty much been the title, if you had wanted it to be.
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December 1, 2009 at 12:00 AM
oh wow that was good i can say that no one has been able to come up with a really good explination for that pairs friendship and stuff and i love that you have come up with such a idea couse i can so see that kind of thing happening
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February 26, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I ADORE!! RaiGen. Those two are just the most.......*squeals* perfect couple ever.
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March 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
That was extremly hot!!
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February 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I never knew I liked this couple until I read it from you. Wow, absolutely wonderful. I was having a jolly old time rereading all of your fics tonight and thought that I'd give the ones I never read a try. I'm glad I did. This is why you are my favorite yaoi writer! I adore all your stories.
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February 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I love this story and the way you described it. Yoiu're a brilliant writer AND artist (I watch you on Y!Gallery too) Great story can't wait to read more ^-^
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December 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Um, yeah. Wow. *fans self* This is... this was... guh. And Raido killed me when he just stopped and went all 'does this mean I'm gay :o?' in the middle. I could freaking taste Genma's not now frustration XD. I love this fic for real.
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November 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh my god. That was the hottest story I have ever read and this is coming from a hardcore yaoi fangirl of about 9 years now. Major kudos to you and keep writing. The world needs more fantastic writers like you.
Also...have you ever thought about writing a novel? If not, you should, you're very good.
Also...have you ever thought about writing a novel? If not, you should, you're very good.
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November 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This is the second time I read this--I'd forgotten this story and how much I liked it. I really love this one a ton--wonderful! It's actually kind of embarrassing because after rereading this, I feel like I must have had this story in mind subconsciously when I wrote Chillin', given some of the similar dynamics. This is so romantic! Especially the touch on the scars! And I liked the realism of Genma not being able to take two fuckings so close together. Gosh, I just really love this one--now, I remember there is a sequel, so I'm off to reread that one!