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That was incredi-fucking-ble. You are talented beyond belief, and this pairing needs more fics like this one. Awesome. Just...wow.

I have to say, I really liked this and the one you did following. I read that one first. I think you should do one between the two time frames. Or, I have to say, I know it's not normal in Anime, but more in real life that they switch. That would be interesting, but not necessairaly possible the way you set the characters up. So, Thank you,
Slave

That was incredibly hot! Why am i just not get aquainted with your work?? Well, it can't be helped V_V Lucky for me i have another 10 fics of yours to read!! Genma and Raidou make such a hot pairing xD Gotta love it!! Excellent excellent piece of fiction!

This was awesome!!! I think you did a VERY good job of describing the sex in first person POV. Also, this piece of writing grabs me a little more viscerally because the dialogue was so realistic--terse, middle-of-sex blurts between two guys--not angsty or overthought. And the way they changed from anal to oral then back to anal felt more like a real encounter than some scripted, too-perfect scene. Thank you. I've bookmarked and read this a couple times because it's so inspired. The first line gives me pause though--is the line "Raidou WAS my best friend" on purpose, because Raidou is now more, if only in Genma's mind? Or was it a past/present tense typo? Because Genma promises they'll stay friends no matter what. No need to answer, really. Just something I think about while I smoke after reading this. 'Cuz it's so good I need a cigarette afterward!

Gahhhhh....ohmyfuckinggod that was HOT! Goddamn, I mean it woman, that was amazing. Genma is such a hot bastard, and it's like Raidou was made for him. Awww, it was great, and had an awesome build-up, perfectly written and no need for improvement.

While not super romantic, that was one of the hottest stories I have read recently. Very well written, flow of language was smooth. Oh, and yeah, really hot!!! I will keep my eyes open for more of your stuff!

I love you. I love you. I love you, I love you, I love you. I LOVE YOU.

Oh, my god. xD

This was THE BEST PWP I've ever read. xDD EVER!!! Gahh... it was so freaking hot! Please write more fics sometime <33

I love this so much... This is in my top favorite fanfiction stories of all time. It's printed, with a place of honor in the porn lockbox. <3

One (just one.. there are so many) of my favorite parts is Genma's view of Raidou's scars:
...beautiful in its own way, like the veins on the underside of a leaf, or the shape of bare tree branches against the sky.

And how Raidou hesitates more over the kiss than he does.. um... (I'm too shy to say it) XD

So much love for this...

I loved this. It was so hot. These guys are one of my favorite couples. Thanks for the fantastic story.