rate_review Reviews

I like it a lot!!!!!

That was absolutely awesome! It was amazing. I think it has to be the definitive Raidou and Genma story. God, that was just perfect. It's one to read again and again . . . and think, fuck, why can't I write stuff like that?

A++++++

Thanks. I pulled an all-nighter for work--I haven't had to do that for about two years, I'm so damn behind, and this, this is just what I needed as a bedtime story!

Wonderful!!!

that was extremely well written. what was most striking was how it felt so "real," in that the stituation is something is none too farfetched. Great character development and smut, ergo a great story. five out of five. i look forward to more stories you write. :-)

OMG that was freaking hot... loved every single thing about it, their such a good couple and i surely can understand the being straight but feeling attracted to someone of the same sex (not happened to me but i can understand lol), wonderfully written :)

Wow, that was very, very sexy.
I loved having it all from Genma's POV, the way he told the story like that, and the smut was *nosebleeds* fantastic.

Awww, this is really good. You should continue this. It would be great. I imagine it would be quite a bit angsty, but who doesn't love a bit of angst when it ends happy? You could make it about Raidou in denial, Genma being the good friend that he is, and them finally getting together. Sorry if I sound like one of those annoying reviewers, especially if you already have written more, I'm just so worried that this is going to be a one-shot, and I really like how you write