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for This is my Goodbye

by Luma

schedule May 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
No you've got to update! Hurry! I need to know what Sasuke plans to do!!! Update Onegai!
person crazy_good
schedule April 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!wut happens? u need to update or i'll die!!!!!!!!die i tell u!!!!!!!plz!!!!update(crying histaraclly)
person jtwsnw20
schedule April 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
i hope u update this. its really good.i have to know what happens.
schedule April 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
i love the opening for this fic and i can't wait for more to be posted. my interest has been peiqued for a long time. what will happen after sasu reads that letter, and what will happen to naruto?
person Anon
schedule April 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
PLease hurry up and write what happens next. Im dying to know~
person duzieinu chick
schedule January 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
this is such a sad story, but it is really good. I love it. Poor Naruto, I feel so bad for him, I almost cried. Your a great writer, please continue this story, it would be a shame if you didn't.
person nyge98
schedule January 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I have never cried this hard in my life. I really want to know what will happen to Naruto in the end. I hope you write again soon.
schedule January 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
omg... i love this story... poor naru... plz update soon
person animelover
schedule October 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Whoa, that was INTENSE!! So are Sasuke and Sakura dating? Why is Naruto dying .. is it because he and Kyuubi are merging? You did a good job with the angst, making it real and heartwrenching. I can't wait to see what you do with this.

Thanks for sharing!
person Athena
schedule October 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This is a really good start to a fanfic. I can't wait for your next chapter, and I'd like to be on the list of those that you e-mail when you update! You can use the e-mail listed with my name (andiyoshiko@comcast.net) and I'll get it almost right away. Thanks, and keep up the good work!