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November 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I love it! Hah! Innocent little Naruto! My favorite kind of Naruto! Please update!
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November 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Kya! Evil cliffies of doom abound! Oh I am SO loving your story. *purrs* I love KakaNaru and can never get enough. ^_^ I am REALLY REALLY looking forward to your update!
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November 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This is really funny! I like a light-hearted take on Kaka/Naru.
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November 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Interesting storyline. Quite hilarious too. Please add another chapter soon. Until then. Ja ne.
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November 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I love this fic! I can't wait for more. It's hysterical!!! More soon please!!
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November 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
get a beta. if you already have one, get a better beta
i also suggest using past tense instead of the awkward present tense
i like the pairing =)
i also suggest using past tense instead of the awkward present tense
i like the pairing =)
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November 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
man i love this fic! i imagined iruka as a chicken go figure lmao! mother hen aha but anyways what's the new plan gonna be and when does naruchan finally get molested by the great kakashi sensei *pervertlaugh* oh when will it happen! XD keep up the good work hun!
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November 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
OMG XD *falls over giggling* This story is so freaking awesome! I can't wait for the next chapter ^_^ Poor Kakashi...telling Gai was SO not a good idea...XP
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November 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
nice. its funny but intriguing look forward to more...if there is any more to write that is....if not then i did enjoy reading what there was of it.
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October 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I adore this couple and I love your other stories, I hope to read more of it very soon!