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May 20, 2014 at 12:00 AM
I really loved this story and am saddened that it was not continued. I would love to see it continued again.
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July 6, 2011 at 12:00 AM
this is really good hope u update soon
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November 13, 2010 at 12:00 AM
whens the next chapter commin out
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September 1, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Update please?
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October 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
this is ubberly awesome.
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September 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Loving the story so far but just a few things... Its spelt Tongue not tong, a tong is something you pick up hot coals with, its quit not quite, i quit the football team, that sword is quite big. second, don't put authors notes in the middle of your stories, you don't see professional writers doing it and neither should you, it just ruins the flow. if you have a authors question or whatever put it at the end.
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July 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This is probably the best naruto fanfic I have ever read can't wait for the rest of it I would give a 10/10 score
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June 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
the ending was beautiful hopefully kurenai understands and accepts him for him, hehehe I can't wait for her to meet kyuubi, about the haku thing u could add haku in the harem cuz if it's an age thing I'm sure kyuubi can work up a age aging jutsu (meaning u can do that I'm giving u solution to make evryone happy) cuz a haku/naru pairing with other is just a plain going to be loved fic so think about it, update soon Ja Ne
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June 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
*takes a deep breath to restrain himself from creating a way to travel through cyberspace to where you are so he can tie you to a chair and force you to continue writing for an occasional meal break if you keep doing a good job.* Alright, so I won't quite go to those extremes but I do like the story and I hope you update soon. Now if you'll excuse me... *Wanders off to go create the machine for traveling through the internet just in case.*
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June 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
good history