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for Naruto the Battousai

by kerrde06

person zeroharm
schedule October 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
wow... avoided this like the plague for the first few times I saw it on here, but forced myself to start reading it now that it has some chapters... Crossovers like this are normally some of the crappiest self indulgent stuff you can get on these types of sites, but you have done this one very very well. Naruto's training is unique, and Kyubi and Kurenai are definitely different than expected. Overall I think this is a good premise because if it had been someone other than Kenshin training him it would have still been good, but the fact that it was him actually adds to the story due to some kick ass writing. On a more personal note I trust you to choose Haku's fate, but I would prefer to see her as a girl... a sad life deserves more has planted her sex firmly in my fan fiction universe and anything else wouldn't feel right. P.S. the obligatory kick ass job and hope to see an update soon!
person avatoa
schedule October 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I am all for the second and third polls dealing with zabuza and haku, but i would prefer if haku lives and is a girl.
person Kilrath
schedule October 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
another good chapter and as far as the polling goes i would say let zabuza and haku live just to mix things up a bit, it could also turn into a future conflict.

The lemon here was also much better than your first one so keep up the good work
person Kilrath
schedule October 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This is an interesting concept and i have thus far very much enjoyed the story.

Update soon