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for Grey

by Melissarose8585

person Anon.
schedule April 12, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Now I'm sad for Sakura. But I'm really liking your writing. You have some talent and thats keeping me interested!
person Lunar84
schedule October 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Amazing. I honestly don't know what else to say. I really wish I could find something other than that to say because now I look like a total noob. Really though, you have amazing talent. This story flows beautifully and drew me in from the very beginning. As weird as it may sound I've always been interested in the dark angsty type stories that have a more adult orientented feel. I have yet to read your other works ,but I can tell just by reading this one shot how truly talented you really are. When I come across a great story and a great author such as I have today, it makes searching through all those awful no plot, poor grammer ,and no type of punctutaion at all type of stories most definately worth it.( Run on FTW!) Your writing is what every reader wants to sit down and enjoy. Please continue to share your wonderful talent with your many fans.
person zeroharm
schedule October 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
If I can find nothing else to say about this one, the least I can put down is that it is original and well written.
person roxnroll
schedule October 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
That was a little sadistic, but hey, I liked it. I think you could continue this one. Maybe?
Rox
schedule October 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
oooh, dark, i like it so far. Looking forward to more and can't wait where you are going with this.