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for The New Otokage

by kinai26

schedule November 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This is such a fun story to read. I love protective Sasuke and less that willing to be protected Naruto. Too cute. And Gaara and Kira! Adorable! Can't wait for the Tsunade and group confrontation. Should be fun.
schedule November 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I love it !!! Sasuke finally gets weak in the knees. LOL This is a great story and very worth reading. Good job.
person mls
schedule November 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Love this story!!!!!!!!! can't wait to read more of it!!!!!!!!!!! I hope you post more of it soon!!!!!!!
person Anon
schedule November 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Yay!
Gaara and Kira sittin in a tree... *laughes* i've seen that comming^^
Have you any plans, how the twins will look like? a blonde girl with Sasukes eyes and a black haired boy with Narutos eyes? or the girl with narutos eyes? or two boys? or two girls? I think, i've never read a ff with twingirls from Naruto and sasuke... that would be a real change... maybe there will be other children? *laughes* but thats all far in the future, right?
For now, just keep writing... maybe the chapters a little bit longer but the rest is fan-tastic^^
I hope Tsunade can manage the little suprise with the twins^^ And i hope, she will be able to let Naruto go...
Can't wait till the next chapter! *thumps up*
person Anon
schedule October 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
That's wonderful news all around!! Naruto and Sasuke are going to have twins and Kira and Gaara are hitting it off!! Hurry with the next chapter!!
schedule October 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
this is so cool it's kinda like a soap opera. what will the hokage say when she finds out about naruto's pregnancy. what about the cousel (naruto is still a missing nin). is kiara going to leave the sound for the sand. will auntie sakura take her place. will gaara finally get laid (at this point i don't care whether it is a man or a woman). i can't wait to see the next chapter to find out.
schedule October 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Ah... Sasuke and Naruto are so sweet!
schedule October 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
i like this story. i skipped it because i thought it was going to be a naru/gaar but low and behold it was a bombing possesive jealous sasuke and perfectly cute ukeish naruto. you also knocked up naruto and that makes you the shit. i can't wait til your next update.
schedule October 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Now if people would leave them alone everything would be fine......but we know thats not gonna happen, right?
person Anon
schedule October 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
How wonderful!! Can't wait to read the next chapter!!!