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for Keep your Hands off my Girl

by ClaireBear

person KristalR
schedule August 7, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I loved it!! Not alot of writers can pull off a sasuke/neji story and very few can make it sexy and raw, but you managed to do it all in one and made me feel like I was right there beside them as they reined someones car!lol Great job!!
person soft_touches
schedule October 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
oOo I love it, sexy! Once again you surprise me with your wonderful writing, you should write one-shot more often.
schedule October 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh my GOD!!!! That was so freaking great! I loved it. Too bad Kiba was the 'bad guy' of the stroy but you made Neji sound like a delisious sex imp! Hahaa! And on the car!? That was so funny I laughed my head off, but seriously there are not that many Sasuke/Neji stories, which is a shame but I totally love what you did with them in this story! More power to you! yay!!!

Cruel_Lust
person Twiggies
schedule October 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This was just sooo good!
Ah, thank God it was Sasuke who won the fight. :D
Kiba deserved all that beating he got from Sasuke.
And beside's, it was so hot! Two guys fighting over our Neji-chan!

And sex on top of someone else's car??
Their crazy, and apperently.. very horny.
Don't take it wrong, I loved it! It so hot.

Really wonderful (sexy!) fic you have here once again!
You must keep writing these.
And of course, the pairing was the best one there can be!
person alpha2nd2006
schedule October 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wow. That was just wow. Haha, poor Kiba, being the bad guy. But you're right, it's hard to imagine anyone else of the then genin 12 playing that part. O_O gah...shino...or lee...that would have been creepy. Anyways, love your work! The decriptions of everything were really good, the clothes, the dancing, the fight, etc.
schedule October 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
i loved that! kiba was definitely the right choice for the asshole, and DAMN!! the lemon was hot. thank you for writting and posting this beautiful piece, i am so glad i read!!~