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Hi Tina! is me lily! wow WHY DID YOU ENDED THERE!! I love this one sooo much!! I have to admit that I was really suprise with naruxitachi at the begging. I'm dying of curiousitity to know what's worng with Tsunade! I want naru and sasu to adopt sora( forgot what is really name was lol)! they would make a great family! great fic like always! update soon plz!

hug&kisses

~Lily~

I really enjoyed your story,but you really need to stop shouting.

I can't believe that someone would write such hurtful words to you to make you freeze in your writing. That is just cruel. I have been reading your story for awhile and I think it's great. It's cleaver and original. and not once did I think it was written by someone with low English skills or that the writing was of poor quality. I admit there are a few miss placed word or spelling mistakes but that is common in all writing even by those that have only ever known English. blah... blah... blah... What I mean is that I love your story. You have done an incredible job with back ground story. the relationship you have made for Naruto and Itachi is beautiful. well done to you. please don't let others get you down they are just jealous of your talents. keep up that great work and I look forward to more of this story.

another score for Sasuke!!really Sasuke are you having a craving for kissing Naruto?!anyway, my heart skipped a bit when I read on that part wherein Sakura tells Naruto that she loves him, I thought there would be NaruSaku, but anyway, thanks for informing immediately that this is a SasuNaru..so sorry Sakura, maybe you really belong to Lee only (The Power of Youth, yosh!)...

great story, cant wait to see what happens when sasu finds out about naruXita hee hee hee

Bravo!! Very good so far... I luv your storyline so far. Please continue!

She better not stand in their way or I'll have to trip her! LOL Great job on the updates too.

I thought they taught basic subject-verb agreement in elementary school. Shouldn't you know how to conjugate properly by now? Or is basic English another casualty of No Child Left Behind? Sweet Jeebuz, learn how to write. Then, we can talk about how you've assraped the characterizations Kishimoto has provided and replaced the Naruto characters with badly-drawn standees.

I guess its gonna be a bumpy road for Sasuke from now on.
Thanks for the update.

Sakura is a little bit sneaky. I don't know if I like that. Naruto belongs to Ita... I mean Sasuke. Sure Sasuke deserves it but Sakura? That just doesn't sit well with me.
Thanks for the update again.