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aawwwwwwwwwwww!! I hope you didn't stop! I really hope this continue's!! PLEASE!!!!

These stories never seize to amaze me keep up the amazing work!

Thanks for updating, I'm really enjoying this story! You've got a great portrayal of Sakura going on here, a great mix of battle-worn leader and sorrowful widow and friend, with just enough touches left of that pink-haired girl to be convincing, caught between her regrets about Naruto and her mission. I especially like her attitude towards Naruto, and the subtle differences in how she sees him now, through the prism of their past love, and how she treats the one in her memories like a seperate person, even as she rebuilds the beginning of their love story with the current one - she has so much love for him that it can't help but spill out. You also made a very good point about Naruto; Sakura IS the only thing in his life that he's wanted just for himself - even his ambition to be Hokage is at least partly to be able to help the village.
It's also interesting to see the small changes, like her attitude to Sai, (which could end up changing the future just as much as the 'important' things, if not more) as well as the big ones. It's good that the people who are and will remain close to her, like Kakashi and Sai, are the ones noticing that she's different. (but are you ever going to explain the 'butterfly'?)
I'm a little confused, though - just how old is younger Sakura in this story? Most of the time, I think that she's late teens, but then something like the party happens, and I wonder if she's early twenties.
Are we going to find out more about the events between 'now' and 'then'? I've got this lurking dread that Naruto died the day after he and Sakura got married. I'm also incredibly curious about the identity of Sakura's two advisors in the first part - I got the impression that at least one of them is a current enemy, or distant nuetral. Also, what happened to Gaara and and Suna crowd? I get the impression you're a fan of theirs.
And, of course, who is the traitor? Part two made me think it's someone who's currently very young. I haven't watched Naruto very long, so I thought maybe Moegi? But Hanabi's acting suspiciously too - but I don't think that Sakura would be so neutral towards her if she had been that enemy - she would have taken the opportunity to do something then and there. Same for Ino, and even Hinata
And will anyone else come back? I keep getting this image of one of HokageSakura's allies coming back, kneeling before her and calling her 'Hokage Uzumaki' - talk about setting the cat among the pigeons!
And is there going to be a drag-out smackdown between Sakura and her enemy? I really thinnk Sakura deserves to vent some stress by pounding the bitch into the ground.

I love this story, but it keeps making me cry..so, how long does Sakura have to fix things? and, who is this person stalking her and wanting to kill her?? Can't wait for the next chappy!!! Keep going, plz!!

Great chapter. I love it.

So Hanabi is the one who came from the time Sakura was from... Why would she be in the bushes unless she was going to attack Sakura or something.. Naruto is going to be a real happy man very soon. And I hope Sakura just tells Naruto how she feels and Sasuke and his superiority complex needs to be taken down a few notches cuz he thinks he is better when he isn't that is why Naruto would get stronger than him

I loved the fact that you updated and that this chapter was just so good. I hope you update soon I want to see what happens next.

You Updated! Man, two in a week. I feel like Christmas came early! Another wonderful chapter for another wonderful story. I can't wait for the next update. When A Soul's Salvation ends, I'm sure this will be my new favorite.

This was a really sweet chapter and I liked it a lot. I can't wait to see if she confesses anything to Kakashi and now you really have me thinking that it's Hanabi that came back and not Hinata...I don't know though, lol.

I loved the sweet little moments between Sakura and Naruto and Sai, he was just cute when he came up with the butterfly nickname for her. Thats a name that I can really see him calling her (like a big brother or something :) .)

I'll be looking forward to the next update, of course! :-D

Ezzy

This story is so wonderful. I am wondering how much of the future Sakura changed when she did what the younger Sakura would not have. Sai views her differently already, Sasuke almost sounds jealous, and Kakashi is now suspicious. Now I know who at least one of her advisers is. I am looking forward to your next chapter.