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October 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
updates for this and soul within three days of each other.... Win!. Still am wondering who the mystery bitch is. Hinata is possible but could it be Shizune? Looking forward to the next chap.
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October 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
loved the second chapter it was just so awesome. It was way better than some of the other stories I have read where they go back in time to change things. I just loved this and hope that you update soon. It would help if you could in your next chapter say around when you update. Great story and keep up the good work.
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October 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Whoa, freaky! But in a good way! This has caught my eye definiately! I hope to see what happens next soon!
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October 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Looks promising. I have yet to read one of your fics that i did not enjoy. I can't wait to see where your going with this one. as for who the evil women is, i'm not gonna guess just yet.
Corbie
Corbie
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October 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Well, normally i dont bother reviewing on AFF.net, but since your an awesome author and you have more than 1 awesome NaruSaku fic, i thought i may as well make an account. Ill probably start reviewing A Souls Salvation too now.
Anyway, I have to say, even though some people say timetravel is a overused plotline, i dont think it has been done like this, i know there are a heap of fics where Naruto goes back in time to save Sakura and stuff, but ive never seen a fic where Sakura goes back in time for Naruto, and i love the idea. I cant wait to see more of this fic along with A Souls Salvation. Also, i also find it interesting that the main threat is a female, or so it looks like, and for some reason i like the idea of it being Hinata, like some reviewers think, even though i like her character lol. Although for some reason i dont think it will be her, dont know why, although i hope it is.
Anyway, hope you update this or A Souls Salvation soon :D
Anyway, I have to say, even though some people say timetravel is a overused plotline, i dont think it has been done like this, i know there are a heap of fics where Naruto goes back in time to save Sakura and stuff, but ive never seen a fic where Sakura goes back in time for Naruto, and i love the idea. I cant wait to see more of this fic along with A Souls Salvation. Also, i also find it interesting that the main threat is a female, or so it looks like, and for some reason i like the idea of it being Hinata, like some reviewers think, even though i like her character lol. Although for some reason i dont think it will be her, dont know why, although i hope it is.
Anyway, hope you update this or A Souls Salvation soon :D
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October 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Great story. And I bet that the woman is Hinata.
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October 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wow! This one lure me in from the beginning. This is the start of another great story. I can hardly wait to see what happens next. I have a few suspicions on who the woman scorned may be, but no clue as to who two advisers are.
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October 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
@_@ OH WOW! Good cliff hanger. I like it,now I have the "A Soul's Salvation" and this one to look out for... TT_TT (sniff) I think I wuv u!
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October 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wow... I can already tell that this is going to be a good one! I'm thinking that its maybe hina-chan but I just can't even picture her being evil, but who knows but the creator herself! Either way, I can not WAIT until you post the next chapter! Great start!!
Ezzy
Btw, I was just looking at that 'other' reviewers statement and kinda had to shake my head. To me, the whole 'time travel' when it comes to stories usually has the entire being, body and consciousness, going back in time. What you've done seems more like a swap of consciousness to me, which makes it pretty unique.
Its fanfiction. You can write whatever the hell you want, its not that serious to where it had to be pointed out.
Ezzy
Btw, I was just looking at that 'other' reviewers statement and kinda had to shake my head. To me, the whole 'time travel' when it comes to stories usually has the entire being, body and consciousness, going back in time. What you've done seems more like a swap of consciousness to me, which makes it pretty unique.
Its fanfiction. You can write whatever the hell you want, its not that serious to where it had to be pointed out.
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October 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Have to say it has a promising start, and I look forward to chapter two so long as you pinky swear you are still writing "Souls Salvation". Also, you really left me wondering who the mystery hater is... does Hinata become an uber bitch in this universe's future?