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November 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
nice, never thought gaara or sasuke would be an angel, though they are very powerful, so they would be seraphim. anyway, since i like the story, i request when you update you email me. my email is deannathx@comcast.net
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October 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Enjoying this a lot - more, more please! :D
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October 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Interesting conversation bwtween Neji, Gaara and Naruto. Makes you wonder why Sasuke did rebel. And of course, I love Naruto's undying belief that Sasuke's just a good guy making bad choices. But then, I suppose I like to believe that too.
Awesome chapter. Your writing is a delight to read. Until the next.
Awesome chapter. Your writing is a delight to read. Until the next.
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October 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
As far as Prolouges go, that was one of the best ones I've ever read. It was straight forward and you set the chracters up nicely for the main story. Can't wait to read your first chapter. Good job.
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October 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
So much potential!!!! I cannot wait to see where you take it. So far, I love it. What an awesome beginning. I will be keeping a look at for more. (Naughty Sasuke! Go get him, Naruto!)