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Me again!! I just went to your profile, you said you weren't fluent in English? If you would like a beta, then I would love to volunteer *coughBEGcough*
Anyway, if you would like that, my email is tenshiofdoom@gmail.com
Okay I'm going :D keep writing!

TOO HOT~! whew... I love, love, love Jiraiya too.

Me liked thissssssssssssssssssssssssssss!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! It was so fucking hot!!!!!!!!!! Oh yeah more more more!!!You writing is absolutely gorgeous!!!!!!! My face got red and now i feel horny muahahahahahahahaha

*fans self*

this was pure hottness on your part, i can't even start on that. *breathes* wow. o.o this was the best smut i've read in a loooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooong while. gods. it was awesome *goes take a cold cold shower*

anyway. apart the hottness of the lemon, which was just great, PWP rules... :D but jiranaru is one of my lovely sins as pairings (my fav is itanaru though). it's hot, and it adds that jira has EXPERIENCE BABY even though he only gets pervy with it.

can't believe he's going to die in the manga, but i'll ignore it. :D

jiranaru needs love. love. love i say!

and i love you for writing this. i want more. o.o so much more. and sorry for the rambling but i am still dizzy for the lemon... *dies*

if i get how to add this fic in my rec list on AFF profile, i will. i have to. it's too good.

kudos and love :D

SOY/MF/Ceph

Yummy. That was hawt I liked jiraya ERO-SENNIN!.<3 Jiraya/naruto is pretty rare I liked how you pulled it off.

P.S. I'M UNDERAGED!!!!!WHOA!!!FOURTEEN RULZ!!!YEAH!!!

Yummy. That was hawt I liked jiraya ERO-SENNIN!.<3 Jiraya/naruto is pretty rare I liked how you pulled it off.
I'M UNDERAGED!!!!!WHOA!!!FOURTEEN RULZ!!!YEAH!!!

I'M UNDERAGED!!!!!WHOA!!!FOURTEEN RULZ!!!YEAH!!!