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for Dreams Come True

by Chemrmnce123

schedule December 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
dude he can add the chan suffix you know since they are dating now and its HAI not aye
schedule December 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Why does Hinata keep saying "Aye"? Is she Scottish?
schedule December 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Needs better grammar, better formatting, better punctuation. Also, Hinata just whispering into Naruto's ear isn't really realistic seeing how she stutters, a typical indicator that she's shy.