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In response for that flame geez! I must not have been paying attention I was under the impression that anything that was described about Naruto's possessions was to show that he had things rather than being poor and have not like most stories describe him as. Not to forget most stories show Sasuke as a rich brat who has to be broken down to actually see others. I like this story so far and I have envisioned Naruto to be a bohemian renaissance. Never considered him to be dirty either. If anything I had expected Sasuke to be a little more stubborn and assholish I find the story to be truly refreshing and intellectual you did you homework and its impressive. Although you are writing for your audiences pleasure work can not be truly appreciated unless the writer is happy with their work. So if you aren't really having fun then no one will. Thank you for the story.

LMAO!! The little dialogue at the end of the chapter was hilarious!! XD. I almost died when Sasuke struck a pose *snickers*. This was great fun, a little eye popping, LOL, but great fun. Hehehe the whole time Naruto was lecturing Orochimaru all I heard in my head was Blah. Blah blah. Blah blah blah blah. Yeah I didn't understand any of that, LOL, XD, even so it was still great fun. I enjoyed it immensely. But you really shouldn't take people on that much. You should take everything with a pinch of salt, if they don't like it they don't have to read it *Hugs u* Sorry I took so long to get to this, sometimes I just have way too much stuff to do. Ja, see you next chapter.

Hahahah this fic is the best!!!.....although i'm a little confused.....how'd they jump from strangers @ an art show.....to boyfriends in Pittsburg, fucking in a hotel???......don't you think they're moving a bit fast???.....hmmm not that i mind......i don't mind at all....trust. Hehe well not scrutinizing or anything...i love this fic....you'll have a shit-load of hits if you keep it up!!! I'LL BE WATCHING FOR IT!!!
Zee_Kay
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Okay, whoever felt the need to point that out to you was an idiot! It's your damn story and I like it. If you take too much time on the descriptions it will just bog down. So whoever that was SHUT UP! I think the characters are fine. After all, it isn't like this is fanfic.... oh yeah, it is! Actually, I hadn't read this story before but I'm definitely enjoying it. Please continue and ignore the flamers, actually, just roast a marshmallow. Nothing rips me more than flamers, some of whom couldn't write a story well enough to find their own ass!

Um, okay, I guess I got my point across.
So then, just keep going. I love this one!
Slave

well i don't care what those other people think i love this story its so great i just love naruto as seme eeeeee *squeals like a fangirl* i love you don't stop writing.

There's nothing wrong with your story, I myself find it quite enjoyable. Just ignore the flames and keep writing it however you want.

Hahahaha this is way cute!!! I can't wait til later chapters, this seems like it's going to be very interesting : ]

aw man i love this story i myself am mayjoring in biology/genetics but i still love this story i can't wait for the next chapter

Very cute. I like this alot and i'll be looking out for the update!

LMAO!! So much for you can't write long chapters XD *Glomps u* You're really sucking me into this XD. I don't mind your Minato at all, he doesn't seem like that bad a guy, but LOL, I kept expecting him to look at Naruto, screw up his face, and ask "What is that god awful thing on your head?" *snickers* hehehehe XD. I mean how many parents approve of dreadlocks XD, hehe, but then again he seems like a supremely informed fellow, he probably knows they're just extensions. Whoo hooo!! LOL, I'm all with Sasuke *does the lemon dance* LOL, it's like a modified version of a rain dance XD, it's mean to bring the lemons XD. I adored the napkin invite, especially the fact that it had a detailed pic of Sasuke on the back, makes you wonder exactly how surprised Naruto really was if he had time to flip over the napkin XD. That kid really is an enigma and I love how he enjoys teasing and tormenting Sasuke. You tickle my brain missy, especially the Bertrand Russell bit. I had a teacher in high school who thought he was the shit. LOL, at that point I was leaning to being a Hobbsian *snickers* I was going through my angry teenager people suck phase XD. God natsukashi ne?? I also love that Sasuke being so understanding XD, I had a little vision of him referring to their respective dad's "You don't ask about mine and I won't ask about yours" *smirks* This is progressing quite nicely ;), did you mean plot bunnies for this story or for other stories?? LOL, sorry I babble when I'm excited. Have a wonderful day/weekend love, Ja.