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for The Definition of Piety

by TillThatTime

schedule March 16, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Please email when you update: narcoleptic86@gmail.com
schedule June 21, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Oh my! Oh lord! Oh geez! Oh christ!
When Neji grabbed Gaara and seated him in his lap, i bursted out laughing. Poor poor them xD
This is pure love, I tell'ya..
I'm gonna have to advertize for this one on my page as well xD
You just can't write anything badly.. Evil evil person :P
person satterb
schedule January 3, 2009 at 12:00 AM
You are a brilliantly talented writer. I found your work after I read "Sinner" on the Bleach site and I just had to read anything else you've written. I hope to see an update soon on this story, but would love even more to see an update to Sinner. Look forward to anything you care to write. I also wanted to say that I don't think Gaara was out of character. He didn't get overly sappy and you put enough fiercness in his actions that he continues to be completely believable. Thanks for the wonderful stories!
person Janette
schedule December 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh my goodness, i just love this story, it just makes me cry over and over again, i just feel happy and sad at the same time, Please update this story, you have me hooked, I constantly come on just to check if you have updated.
Then sadly find you haven't
I would greatly like to see how the story goes on.
person :)
schedule August 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
^^
person gaara89
schedule July 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
*Sobbing* Why won't you update?! I realize you have a life outside of this story, and I know what it's like to have to balance writing with life, but honestly it feels like forever since you last updated. What has it been, five months? Please update soon. *Being reduced to a quivering puddle of sobs* I just can't take not knowing what will happen next!



~Reigh~
person Azumi-chan
schedule July 6, 2008 at 12:00 AM
LadyMisaga@yahoo.com since I didn't log in. It's been a while since I have had the internet, but I don't recall reviewing this chapter, so I just had to say I love it! Sasuke is being a possessive prick and rubbing it in Gaara and Neji's face, it's funny as hell. Those two would make a cute couple, and look out Naruto has a plan! I love how the story keeps going and Sasuke as the uke, looking forward to that as well. It keeps me wanting more everytime I read a chapter, comical, serious, meaningful, emotional, and well written all at once, it's wonderful to read such a great fan fiction. Thanks for writing it, going on to read the next chapter.
person Ichiro
schedule June 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
i must tell you now, i have only just started reading this story and i love it...may i worsihip you?
schedule June 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Don't worry, we are still with you. And if it takes as long as it did to write such a chapter then I'm all for it. Awsome as always and yet again another evil cliffhanger...*grrr* Naruto really IS clueless, isn't he? And now he tries the same tactic that Neji and Gaara did...*snigger* Can't wait to read more ^_^
person gaara89
schedule May 27, 2008 at 12:00 AM
OMG I just read it again! I'm dying for the next chapter! Please update ASAP!!!