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for The Definition of Piety

by TillThatTime

person inumoon3
schedule November 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
OH MY POOR NARU-CHAN!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I hope Neji's plan works and Sasuke needs to be slapped and forced to realize how much he loves Naruto!!!!!
person lo
schedule November 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wow! This is getting really good. It just takes your emotions and twists. Nice work.
person gaara89
schedule November 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Ahh!! It just keeps getting better and better! Please update soon!
schedule November 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Where should I start? Alright, first of all I'm honoured that you like my Shika x Neji fic Fateful Days so much...I know I'm waaaayyy behind with my update...sorry, I'm still continuing it though. So please stay tuned ^^. Now, to your update...hmmm, how shall I put this...hmmm, WAAAAHHHH I cannot find the right words just HOW amazing your story is! And was that an 'almost-kiss' there between Neji and Gaara?...hehehe. And Neji peeking in on Sasuke and afterwards getting all shy...kawaii ^_^ And the bluntness of Gaara *rofl*...brilliant. Can't wait for more!!!
schedule November 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
OMG I think you just broke my heart that was so beautifully painful to witness. I truly felt as though I was watching a moment to privet for my eyes. Well Done. so beautiful. Sasuke's a bastard, and yet I still love and my heart bleeds for the four men in this story. Thank you so much for sharing.
schedule November 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I like the way this story is written. I look forward to the next installment.
schedule November 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Ahhh... I missed a chapter again, but now I'm caught up. ^___^

I love the sensual build-up, the teasy hints of voyeurism, the touches of humor, the masculine tenderness... Great chapters.
schedule November 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Every chapter you write gets more and more brilliant. So much emotion! I could feel Sasuke's frustration, want and fear. (Oh, good job with the tent scene, by the by) I could feel Naruto's sadness. And Neji and Gaara... just amazing. Your writing is amazing. The nighmare scene was so bittersweet. For Sasuke and Naruto because they both want it and yet do nothing and then for Gaara and Neji because they want it and are choosing to walk away. I think I have said this before, but your portrayal of their growing relationship is beautiful. Until the next.
person gaara89
schedule November 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
you did a good job! please update soon! i can't wait to see where Neji and Gaara's relationship, or Naruto and Sasuke's relationship for that matter, go from here.
person despairs
schedule November 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Very good chapter...i think you did everything really, really well. I can see both couples growing closer to each other (wish Sasuke would stop being so frickin stubborn tho) and I like how you're not rushing this but yet it isnt taking forever either...it's a perfect pace. Looking forward to more! :D