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for The Definition of Piety

by TillThatTime

person HumanInfitltrator
schedule November 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
That was beautiful, not rushed, not vulgar, actually rather sweet. Thank You.
person lo
schedule November 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I like what you are doing with this. It is nicely written and realliy just keeps you interested.
schedule November 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Very very good. I really like the slow work up to the neji/Gaara relationship, rather than hey we have this in common lets do it. This is very sweet and heart braking. Sasuke's scene was very hot. Thanks for sharing.
person Word_Slave
schedule November 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I loved this! You did great! more soon please! I have now idea why it never pops to the top. Mine didn't either for the longest time.
Slave
schedule November 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Yay, update, update!! *dances around happily* And what a good chapter...I'm still sniggering. The way you discribe Sasuke and Neji and Gaara...hilarious ^_^ And our dear Sasuke...such a naughty boy, playing peeping-tom. Can't wait for more so please go back to your computer and continue. I'll even give you a Naruto-shaped cake *hands TillThatTime the cake* See, there you go. Now please continue ASAP!!!
schedule October 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
OMG... I loved Sasuke's theory on Neji and Gaara "administring capital punishment". Funny 'cause it's true. As always, I love the relationship that Gaara and Neji are building. And when Sasuke went off on Naruto and I was reading Naruto's reaction I almost cried. Such expressive, emotional writing. Awesome. Simply awesome. Until the next.
person gaara89
schedule October 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Yay! Update soon please!!
person Word_Slave
schedule October 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Sorry I haven't reviewed lately. I must have missed the updates. But I love Neji and Gaara in this and I can't wait for one of them to realize just how much they like each other! It's so bad that I'm plotting the moment for you... Shower, Lake... midst of a fight...up agasint a wall... (slap) Bad Slave, bad slave. Love you! More soon please.
Slave
person Vin
schedule October 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Eeee! This is an adorable idea, and I'm so happy someone with talent is writing it! I'm excited, and can't wait for an update. *Dance*
schedule October 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Fantastic!! Finally someone who can write! I thought I have to give up hope but then I read your story and I have to say I'm hooked. I really like your style and the idea of two of the most antisocial people in Naruto trying to get Sasuke (THE super-emo) together with the blonde is just hilarious. And of course I cannot wait for the things that may happen between Neji and Gaara ^_^ So, more please ASAP!