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for The Definition of Piety

by TillThatTime

person MeLaiya
schedule May 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I am so loving this, you really should update more often
person SamuraiSaaya
schedule May 23, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Loved the ending of this chapter. Definitely delicious. The Gaara and Neji pairing is one of my ultimate favs, maybe even my first. I loved how you make them interact with eachother and adding Naruto's "plan" just makes it all the more hilarious. I absolutely adore your writing style. Keep up the delicious work ;)

Please update soon !
schedule May 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Glad to see that you are back. Wonderful chapter. I'm glad that finally the relationship is beginning.
schedule May 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
...Damn. That was...hot!

Please write again soon! Want more GaaNej action!
schedule May 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
YAY! You updated, I am so glad. I like Gaara's talk to Neji at the end of the chapter. We all know Neji will say yes, I mean how could he not., He likes Gaara, finds him attractive and he can't have Naruto. I also liked the part about stand by your man, when Sasuke needed to eat. I think he deserves a reward. Either way I can't wait till you updated again...as you can tell I am greedy for a good story.
Glad finals are over, and all your issues have calmed down. I am sure we all understand that you have a world outside "the definition of piety".
person charmpit
schedule May 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
OMFG I don't know why all of a sudden Gaara is an OOC cocktease in his fics, but I am not complaining! Not even Neji can resist the redhead's charms, and Neji's got quite a few of his own. I am looking forward to reading how this all turns out!
person gaara89
schedule May 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Ahhhhh!!!!! Yay!!! How could you stop there! Omg I missed you so much! Please update soon! PLease, Please please! I had almost given up hope!!!
person gaara89
schedule May 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I know you haven't been around for a while, but I really like this story and I hope you haven't abandoned it. Please continue it soon!
person gaara89
schedule April 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
**Sobbing!** Are you ever going to write again?!!?! **Sobs harder**
person gaara89
schedule April 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I know I reviewed today already...but...I NEED MORE OF THIS STORY!! I understand that you have a life outside of fanfiction, but I really need to know what happens next! Please don't leave it at this.