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for The Definition of Piety

by TillThatTime

person inumoon3
schedule April 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
UPDATE SOON!!!!
person gaara89
schedule March 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I hope you update soon! :( I'm so sad when I don't see a new chapter for so long.
person gaara89
schedule March 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Please update soon I'm dying here!!
person lo
schedule March 8, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This is great!!! I really like the being equals in all aspects of their relationship. Most people that write fan-fiction are not mature enough to get away from gender rolls even when writing for two men. Great job!! I can't wait to see more.
person ydjessy
schedule March 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Now this is kind of funny, I bet Naruto and Sasuke are going to do the same thing Gaara and Neji were doing to them. Hope you update soon. I'm looking forward to it.
schedule March 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I about DIED when Neji grabbed Gaara!

And I love how the tables have turned on Neji and Gaara. Now it's Naruto and Sasuke's turn to mess with their love lives.

(sorry for not reviewing earlier, I just got an account about a week ago)

It was worth the wait! (and that's saying something--it took forever for this chapter to come out)

Please continue when you can!
person Arlita
schedule March 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Thank You.
schedule March 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Beware, Naruto has a plan....be afraid, be very afraid *snigger*. Brilliant, hot, funny, amazing chapter as always. You know I can't wait to read more ^_^
person HannaFO
schedule March 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Very enjoyable story :D Please do update again soon!
schedule March 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
hahahahaha etc etc soooo freaking hilarious. the entire chapter was awesome! full of win. sasuke and naruto's interaction was wonderful as usual, all the teasing and how our little seme said he was more than willing to bottom for naruto aawwww lol i love them! And of course the nejigaara team vs sasuke MWHAHAHAHAHA leading to utter insanity like neji pulling gaara where?! LMAO far far FAAR too entertaining :)