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for The Definition of Piety

by TillThatTime

person gaara89
schedule March 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
OMG!! I almost didn't believe it when I saw it!! Great chapter! Please!!! PLEASE don't make me wait so long again!! Oh and CONGRATULATIONS!!!!!!! Thanks for the shout out! I'll always be a loyal reviewer, even if you don't update often. I'll just review until you do! Yay!
person cinnamon_star
schedule March 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
*squeals* Thank you so much! Finally the next chapter!!! I just loved it. So many sentences made me laugh out loud like "So, Uchiha, how did the fucking go last night?" or "...and he made a mental note in his sleep-hazed mind to smirk in triumph later because, damn, he was good.". It's funny how the story changed. At first Naruto and Sasuke had problems to admit their feelings for eachother and Neji & Gaara tried to bring them together and now it's the other way round. Very, very nice story so far. Keep up the good work. Ciu...
person caidanu
schedule March 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
What!!! No, no urinating on me please...but you are allowed to hump the hell out of me. I loved getting humped and humping others *starts to frantically hump computer* can you feel the love?? Oh and loved the posessivness..."MINE" Yeah that's right.

Oh but babe I have to warn you I would make a horrible uke..I way to dominate and independant *still madly humping computer* but I am taking applications for an opening uke position for myself XD

Ok so what were you smoking when you wrote this chapter because it was freaking hilarious. I couldn't stop laughing..oh my Sasuke bastard was great with his bastardly comments towards Neji and Gaara.

I'm so damn happy that he's going to agree to uke for Naruto *starts humping couch*

Come on you little emo bastard you know you want Naruto to show you all about his stanima. I can't wait for the next chapter and to read how Naruto's plan works out.

schedule March 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
LMAO

First Neji and Gaara work together to get Sasuke and Naruto to confess, now it's Naruto and Sasuke tag teaming them. Lovely bit of poetic justice if I do say so myself!
person MeLaiya
schedule March 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Im loving this really I am, its been fricken crackin me up since day one but I gotta say. You really are over-using the whole "dobe" thing, its starting to get a little annoying and for the love of grits please finish this, its been goin on forever. I WANT SOME HOT GAARA/NEIJI ACTION MAN!

P.S.
Keep up the good work and update soon.
person Azumi-chan
schedule February 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wonderful, I do hope that Neji can get over that, he should be with Gaara, they are really meant for each other. Well written and very much in character all the way around. I simply adore your devotion to keep everyone in character and your hard work to creat orginal stories. I love it when I come across real stories like this one with real writers writing the stories. You truly have a natural ability to write, keep it up and I am looking forward to the next chapter.
schedule February 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Waaaahhhaaaa, I'm BAD! Bad, bad yaoilovergirl...here you go and read my story, leaving me such an amazing review and what do I do? Nothing... I'm so, so, so sorry....your fic is amazing, your writing style is amazing...YOU are amazing... Thank you for the new chapter and please continue ASAP. I swear, I'll never ever leave you again!! Especially now that Gaara and Neji are finally getting closer. I soooo can't wait for more shy Gaara and guilty Neji!
person Chrysler
schedule February 17, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Um....please tell me that's not the ending....cause if it is, I'm going to have to kiiiiill you....no really.....that's cruel! I was looking forward to that couple more than Sas/Naru but I'll admit, I like how slow you're taking this. Its cute
person Anon
schedule February 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
thanks
person caidanu
schedule February 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Ok so here is the link to my page, it will take you to my submissions. http://yaoi.y-gallery.net/user/caidanu/ I don't know what it is about the y! but I still have a hard time navigating it sometimes and I have no clue how to search for other poeple on there. Good luck and if that still doesn't work e-mail me shai69_420@yahoo.com. I'll ttyl babe.