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for The Definition of Piety

by TillThatTime

person caidanu
schedule February 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh I almost forgot, make sure that you've activated your account before trying anything on the y!. Not sure if that helps or not but I had forgotten to activate mine when I first made an account and drove myself insane for about an hour trying to figure out what the hell I was doing wrong. It's the little that will most likely one day kill us or cause us to go biserk and take out half the town ^_^
person caidanu
schedule February 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Ok babe I'm done with your fan art and I hope you like it. Sorry that it has taken so long but I ran into some trouble with the coloring process. Anyway I may redo it for you when I get a drawing pad for my computer so please forgive the mistakes. I've posted on y! gallery here is the link. http://yaoi.y-gallery.net/view/385256/ You may need a y! account to view this but I doubt it since it doesn't have adult content. If you have any problems viewing the pic email me and I'll send it to you but hey you should get a y! if you don't have one because it's so much fun.
schedule February 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Continue!!! Gaara and Neji are so perfect for each other, I love they way they interact... they bring out precious things in each other.
person gaara89
schedule February 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I hope you are updating soon! I love this story so much! Please!
person caidanu
schedule January 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh good chapter ^_^ poor Neji having those damn moral dilemmas. Gaara may have to just corner him and make him realize that he's a big boy and can handle himself. Oh and I'm almost finish drawing then it will be off to coloring in th pic for you.
person Anon
schedule January 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I just read the whole thing and the story has been really beautiful and IC the whole time. I love the plot. I can't wait for another chapter ^^
person Tofu-pimp
schedule January 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh whoa..I'm so glad that you liked the fanart! :'D It makes me soo happy inside to know! *cheers*
I really enjoyed the softness of this chapter--it was beautiful seeing how tentative they were together. I can't wait for the next chappie! ;0; I swear, more fanart is due for your hard work.
person biiisti
schedule January 26, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I absolutely loved the last chapter! I've never been huge fan of GaaNeji but i'm certainly one right now!

By the way, you'r writing is good and there isn't spelling/grammar mistakes and the plot is also good ^^

I hope u update soon (:
person gaara89
schedule January 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Please tell me you're going to update soon!!!
person lo
schedule January 25, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Nicely done. That was both sweet and sad. I can't wait to see more!