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for The Definition of Piety

by TillThatTime

schedule January 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
though i'm just here for the sasunaru i have to say that gaara/neji was heartbreakingly sweet. sasunaru got the first 10 chapter and they were an awesome ten so i'm willing to sit back an let the gaara/neji/gaara fans have their moment :D
person caidanu
schedule January 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Yay another chapter. Sorry I didn't realise when I left my last review that you had updated this fic. I can't wait for the next chapter and the impending smut that could possibly follow ^_^ On a side note I've always found the Neji and Gaara thing rather interesting; don't get me wrong I do enjoy reading the smut between them it's just that they have never had much interaction in the Manga but I really like how you have brought them together with getting to know one another. It fits well.
person MeLaiya
schedule January 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
aaaarrrrrggggghhhh, you finally update and its a fricken teaser. Oh the inhumanity of it all. Well anyhoo, loving this as usual. Could you make the next chapter a little longer or perhaps post more than one at a time. IM BEGGING FOR GOOD FICTION HERE, I LOVE THIS!!!!!!! Oh...and um...keep up the good work.
schedule December 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Stop Playing with my emotions like Sasuke and get to pushing Gaara and Neji together. I need the lemony goodness
person gaara89
schedule December 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Are you ever going to update?
person shai69
schedule December 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hey, I am currently drawing a pic of Naruto and well the picture has developed from my original intention. Anyway due to the direction it's going I'm going to deticate to this fic because when I looked at it this story was the first to come to mind. I hope that it turns out well and I'm not sure when exactly it will be finished. If you don't have a yaoi gallery account email mail me so I can send it to you when I'm done XD.
schedule December 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
That has to be one of the most well written lemon's I have ever read. I honestly hope that when my time comes to write one I'll do just as good of a job as you did. It was hot, sweet, sexy and beautiful and I can't wait for the Gaara x Neji lemon ^_^
person lo
schedule December 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
That was, as a whole a sweet chapter. The sex scene was a little long but nicely done.
schedule December 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
man alive! this is one good ass story! i always saw it but never read since i'm not a big neji an gaara couple fan, but i had the day off today so had some time and wooooowww. very excellently written! the second to last chapter literally had my heart in my throat wondering how is was gonna turn out with naruto an sasuke. good god woman. *applauds you* very excited to see how things go with them from here on.

ps your sasuke solo action... you first??? hard to believe, hard to believe :D
person despairs
schedule December 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Dont be nervous! :D Easy for me to say huh? But really, i think that the lemon was awesome. You made their first time really special. I'm so happy that they are finally together...now if only they stay that way. *crosses fingers* I really hope they do....now for Gaara and Neji woohoo lol.